A parte do "abuso" foi complexo para mim, realmente, mas entendi seu ponto e no final não foi submissão, nem síndrome de nada, apenas algumas percepções trazidas tardiamente quando a carta de Olivaras chegou e esclareceu mais a Harry do que a Draco, por que mesmo Draco sendo manipulador ele ainda falou várias vezes que Harry teria como ir embora a todo momento e o moreno nunca fez. Eu ainda fiquei em dúvida, por que parecia uma "compulsão" mas na verdade era um desejo manifestado fora de padrões sociais estabelecidos, mas Harry se resolveu, mesmo que tardiamente sobre isso! Obrigada por mais essa fic reflexiva!

Interesting story. Not something I would have thought Ollivander petty enough to do, but he obviously is in this story. Can’t say I liked all aspects of this story, but it is probably still better than anything I could come up with.

I can't believe that Ron and Hermione are so supportive a bond that forced rape on its victim and yes anything less than conscious consent is absolutely rape. The idea that the bond exists because they 'want each other even if they don't really want each other' does not make any sense at all to me and at the very least Hermione should be horrified that magic would force someone to have sex against their will. This isn't based on trust or liking or someone and the fact that they have sex when Harry still dislikes Malfoy is not romantic but horrifying. I like so many of your stories and you write a lot of good characters but this one is not about love its about force and then just giving into the force. The idea that this bond is actually something to be grateful for in the end is just something I can't believe. I wish the bond had broken and they had gone their separate ways and then perhaps a few years later reconnected for real

The only I wish was different about this story? That it was broken up into chapters vs one long ass scroll. But I loved it! Would have been nice to see him get another new wand but loved it.

I like your fiction.

Maaaaan, what I would've given to see Ollivander'a reaction to the happy couple! Hehe...

Fantastically written loved the idea of Olivander as a baddy. Wasn't sure he would want to cause trouble for Harry, but from his letter, it seems he thought Harry would enjoy turning Malfoy away! How wrong he was! Loved the way they came together in the end and it was very hot ! ;)

It was very well!
I prefer the freedom to have the choice. *-*
They are in love or will be and it is enought.

Never though ollivander could be a bad guy. Good story.

I wonder if Ollivander ever finds out how his revenge actually worked instead of the way he wanted it to.

Tehehe

I really hope there is a sequel! And this is a great story. Thanks for writing it!

I adore your phrasing! You have a delightful gift for composing your sentences in a way that's natural, but still descriptive and humorous. Utterly marvellous! *eagerly keeps working my way through your stories*

I've read this before, but apparently failed to review. I've no idea why, but I found myself rooting for Harry to reject Draco at the end and go off and date other guys after all. I guess Draco came across as too smug about his sexual prowess and experience, and lorded it over Harry a wee too much-or was that just his insecurity coming out again? Or maybe I was intrigued by the idea that Harry discovers he has commitment issues after all, and not just against Ginny. Or maybe after reading Ollivander's account of how Draco acted toward him and how callous he was about the torture and suffering, I wanted to see Garrick avenged after all. Perhaps it was a combination of all of those things. I found myself liking Draco...and yet rooting for him to not get what he wanted, at least not at the point that he did.

cuit cuit
so sweet