A good fanfic, kind of unsatisfying though. They didn't admit their feelings for each other until the very end.

this really good!

Wow, I think more Twilight readers should read your story. This story is GOLD and should get more readers.

U sir made a damn good fic. I loved the developement and pacing of the storie

That was incredibly sweet. Thanks so much for this wonderful story! _

Buh. Well, that was kind of a sudden ending. Or maybe not. I dunno. I feel like I got left hanging, or maybe I was reading too much into the story :(

Awesome story, albeit too short. I'd really love to read a sequel if you ever started writing one.

Good Job! It's stories like yours that make me feel patched up from the gaping whole that was left from the ending of volume 12. It would be great If you were to write a sequel. Either way I wish you luck with your future endeavors.

Geez, I'm glad and sad to see this end so well. I admire how natural you made the intimate scene between them once they return to her apartment (though I couldn't quite figure out if that happened at the leave from the fast food joint or entering the apartment). In particular, how you noted how they both felt so at ease by the first kiss rather than jabbering on and on about the morality of it. Sometimes I regret not taking this eased path for Sibling Complication, but that's how it is.

I'll definitely continue to look to this piece for inspiration. Thanks for your hard work!

P.S. Clearly, an encore would be greatly appreciated and desired! How will the siblings act once they are in America?! I'd like to see how Kyousuke adapts to an American lifestyle.

Great story, wish it had been a little longer but I thoroughly enjoyed it :)

I really loved this story. I'm not sure how I feel about it taking place so far in the future, but it is a charming story.

Was worth the wait

I agree with roankun you should have some kind of "10 years later" kind of thing like they did with the actual series.

Brilliant ending, I followed your story constantly.

That was absolutely awesome. Somehow, I'm kinda itching for some sort of epilogue, or a sequel, or another story by you with this pairing :D
Anyway, that was really great! I love your dialogue, although this last chapter was a tad bit awkward. . Anyway, looking forward to more works by you! :D