hey! really good job! cant wait to see more were this is going :)

Hey! I love the story so far...I don't like to think of Alex as iiresposible...but hey, its possible. :) You do a really good job with writing, and the story is captivating. I see some typos and wrong words (homonyms are a killer) prob just from fast typing...but things like two, who, were and where and some other things. Cant wait to continue!

i love the plot, and for the most part it's done well, but you really have a spelling issue with this story. hire a beta. otherwise, great job!

wooooh! new chapter! D

It sounds like Alex and Alana are getting a bit more used to living together, which is always a good thing.

I'm looking forward to the action sequel, of course if Alex and Alana end up back at Brooklands covered in yet more bruises it will give people a lot more to talk about.

Can't wait to find out what happens... )

Im sorry. I just went on ur profile page and saw u were dyslexic. I f id known i wouldnt have corrected u. Again i really like this story :{)

I dont want to offend u or anything but so far while reading this story ive found a lot of spelling mistakes like u spelled shore when its supposed to b sure and meat when its spelled meet. Maybe u could just go back through the story and fix ur mistakes or have somebody proof read it for u. I really like this story so far though.

Well darn, yet more rumours for Alex to deal with XD

i hope he can get rid of the new rumour though; it's one thing for people to think you're taking drugs, but it's worse to be though an abusive boyfriend :(

can't wait to see what happens next!

:)

pretty please updste im in absolute love with story, and that is beside the point that you are an awsome author

Ooooh, Alana has started at Brooklands! That should be interesting, let's hope she doesn't spill any secrets. )

I'm confused that Tom doesn't know Alex is a spy, cos he does in most of the books.

Also, this sentence makes no sense: 'the fact that Alex had become visibly unconvertible', i think you must have spelt something wrong there.

I'm loving all the updates D

yeh, a giant argument in the middle of the park is not the best way to keep a low profile. i wonder how he's going to explain this at school )

muy buena noticia que seguir con la historia estoy muy contenta

actualice pronto,

it's great that Alex has finally decided to do the whole 'father thing' properly

i love this fic of yours, i always thought Alex would make a great dad, being especially overprotective because he grew up without a proper family life

:)

update ASAP

They must look such a mess, all three of them lol )

Well at least she can handle herself, lets hope Alex doesn't accidentally push her again...goodness...)