Will May be appearing?

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Naruto should get a Zorua.

This is good. I am so out of touch with current pokemon, I laid off pokemon since Sapphire. But, I think I'll give this story a go.

that was good keep it up

This truly is an amazingly interesting and original concept. You set up konoha in the pokemon world in a completely believable though out there fashion. You gave the main character ((I.e. Naruto)) a special ability that sets him apart while keeping him in character. You also stopped at nothing to fill the story with names of pokemon in place of actual animals for analogies, all of which were funny. You were quite technical with your pokemon entries but brief enough to not bore people with details. I didn't see any grammar mistakes at all. All in all it was a very nice first chapter. If you need any help, just ask. I like helping people with these naruto/pokemon crossovers so it's no problem.

i'm looking forward to the next chapter

this is a vere good and interesting story and i hope you do your beast on it

Okay beginning, I see potential here.

Please update

I like this. I hope that Naruto get some Dragon types. Also what you to update this and not like you ohter story that you abanded.