I really hope you get a chance to finish this story

Well I really just love this story it has action , adventure, intrigue and romance .I really hope that you get a chance to not only add to the story but finish it. Good luck!

Update?

Seriously? It was below the belt to call Bree a Bitch? Lol. Bella is so lame in this! Man! This woman, who has been giving information to this radical group so they can assassinate the royal family, doesn't deserve to be called a bitch? Really? So lame.

I'm not a fan of these two...more so Bella. These 2 lack chemistry so very much. So, so much. Just my opinion. The personalities fall flat. Not a fan.

I look forward to more. I'm guessing that Edward has a contingency plan.

That was an exciting chapter, but really, Bella enough with the fainting. It is old already.

If Heidi is tied to the radical group, why was esme pushing her as bride? Edwards parents didn't trust Edward's judgment in picking a bride because his judgment was not good in selecting Heidi as girlfriend? Or confronting the Volturi? Again, then why push him to marry Heidi. I'm confused.

There must be other Vulturi connections (spies) in the palace. Who? Rosalie? Jacob? Alice?

What is the deal with Emmett's abdication? The wrestling story sounds far fetched. Even if he is so enamored with Olympic wrestling (again, far fetched) he would be well past the age of competition by the time his father gave up the throne. Why couldn't he do both? Or wait on abdication to see if there was truly a conflict? There is no reason for such a drastic action as abdication. It is also not that believable that Rosalie (she who craves attention) would agree to give up the title of future Queen. So what is the real situation? This seems to be an excuse rather than the reason.

I am looking forward to learning the back story on Heidi. I'm assuming she is a beautiful and charismatic (snake) charmer of some sort, like the character in canon, but that she lacks integrity and betrayed Edward in some way. What does she and Rosalie hope to accomplish? Why would Esme favor Heidi as daughter-in-law and future Queen?

If Edward wants a real wife, as opposed to a spoiled debutante, he needs to open up. I can't believe Edward told Bella to "go to her room." He promised her his devotion, but he sets her up by keeping secrets. Bella deserves his candor and their relationship won't thrive on anything less. Bella, stand your ground now before it is too late.

Renee is sweet. Rosalie not so much. I'm hoping Bella is able to gain confidence fast.

If Bella has a solid foundation in Latin she should have a head start in Italian vocabulary as many root words are the same or similar. Grammar will be different, however, with the end result that she will understand the gist of conversations well before she is fully comfortable speaking the language.

Bella is supposed to be intelligent young woman, right? Why isn't she taking a crash course in Italian? That more important for her to do than planning a wedding or even packing. She will be at such a disadvantage in Volterra without understanding the primary language. What is she thinking?

I like this story I cant wait for the next update. when will it update I hope it will be soon though

I do hope you'll update and finish this whenever you have time :)

I really love this story I hope you finish it

Oh no! I didn't realize that this story is incomplete! I feel the end soon. What a terrible cliffy to leave us at! I really would like to know what happens!