Sexy with a touch of humor.

Much as I loved this, you need to learn the importance of paragraphs. I had to force myself to read the rest, not because your writing was bad, because it wasn't, but because it all ran together and I almost didn't know what I was reading.

May I just suggest more paragraphs? HUge b;ocks of lettering are difficult to read and readers get lost. Otherwise, the story itself is wonderful. Some minor spelling issues, but really a sweet, sexy fic. _

for future reference, more paragraph breaks might be nice :3

That aside, this was a great story :) I really enjoyed reading it.

omg totally want more of that! too bad its a one shot!

thx

phoah! hot. XD

Awww so sweet, I never expected Merlin to top but damn that was hot! Well done, at least Merlin won't have those nightmares anymore :)

You need to work on your paragraphs - as in, there needs to more of them, and your dialogue is very clumped together. There should be a new line pretty much every time someone starts talking, just for the sake of easy reading. Other than that, it was pretty well written.

Very sweet and hot! So e of the "their"s should be "they're" but otherwise beautifully written

Awh, this was lovely. I really liked the ending.

i really enjoyed this. it was so sweet that Merlin was sleeping outside to make sure he was ok awwwww! and when Arthur was being so insecure.. i love him like that cuz he's normally so full of himself.

you should consider breaking up the paragraphs in this more though cuz them being so long makes it hard to read. it helps if you start a new one everytine someone speaks. also, you refered to Arthur as a King a couple of times and then switched back to Prince again.

all in all...i likeed it XD

Very beautiful and hot! Love that merlin has nightmare about Arthur really dying. Arthur was so loving and vulnerable in this

really Hot! was not expecting Arthur to bottom Love it

Great story! I really enjoyed it. I especially liked the part where Arthur realizes Merlin has been sleeping outside his door for a whole year!

I would however suggest you edit it a little and cut those giant paragraphs into smaller chunks. As a reader you start to lose your place when it's all mashed together like that.

Other than that, great job!