Love your Story

Looks good to me!

absolutely brilliant. your writing is genius, and the plot was so believable. i wish the show would do some episodes like this. ;) well done! definitely a new favorite story. :D xx

I loved it.
It was so sweet but good building, it had the right suspance.
Thanks for your job.
I'm sorry for my english, maybe it's not correct.
Bye.

Love the story. You should write an episode for season 3. I can so easily picture them while reading the story and I absolutely love the interaction between Steve and Danny.

This was an awesome story! Perfect characterization. It woulda made a grrrrreat episode!

This was certainly worth the wait, thanks for persevering and finishing this! Great job!

I very much enjoyed this story! Well written, funny, and in my oppinon very much in charactor! I espeacialy thought you had Hesse down perfect! It was like he was speaking for real! Great job!

Ahw, I'm sitting here now reading this final chapter with a huge grin on my face :D A perfect ending.

That banter between Danny and Steve was so...uhm...real, for the lack of a better word; I could totally see the scene in front of me, really great writing ;D

Hope you'll write more of such great stories soon!

Hey, welcome back! Was so glad to see an update from you appear in my inbox, because that meant you hadn't abandoned this great story :D HAve to admit I had to reread the first two chapters for a bit, but that was no punishment at all.

Oh my, you nearly made my heart stop too, when Steve suddenly stopped breathing! Very evil of you ;P

Loved the twist on Hesse being the one that stabbed Steve, definitely didn't see that one coming. No I'll go on to the next chapter, hope the doc will bring good news ;)

Yay! So glad you finished this and did love it, like I thought I would :) Go you for sticking with it - it was great to re-read it and know the ending too. Love how you craft a story - always great to read.

Thanks for entertaining me in my wind-down time tonight :) Gotta love an incapacitated Steve, since we don't get this fix on the show itself LOL! The ultimate H/C fic :)

*hugs*

xx

great story!

enjoyed reading big time

thanks for finishing

think we all know by now who's behind hesse, but poison doesn't seem like his style at all

great chapter!

don't envy the doc having to talk to a worried danny ;)

hope they'll find the one(s) responsible

glad i found this, perfect beginning to a story