This is just...OMG just so good! I can't even put it into words! This is freakig art.

Wow, I love it. Great job. I hope that you'll continue writing Black and N pairing stories. See you soon.(-)(-)(0)(0)

;_; This was beautiful, oh god. It was everything I've been looking for in an issushipping! ...Well, minus the Ghetsis part. xDDDD;

But your characterization of N was perfect! Him being all frail and childish but still loving Black and always wanting to please him... I loved it. (: Nicely done!

Wow! That was incredible! You have a real talent there!

Anyway, I just LOVE how Black keeps telling N that he's perfect. It seems like telling N 'I love you' wouldn't have the same effect. N just seems so happy when that happens, and that made me smile! Haha. Corny, I know. And I didn't think I could hate Ghetsis anymore than I already did, but you proved me wrong. My hatred for Ghetsis grows stronger! Haha.

Keep writing, and I'll keep reading! -Favorited!-

*fangirl scream* okay this is another story that is turning me into a fangirl! 3

I loved it! You are such a good writer and I enjoy everyone of your stories, but this is one of my favorites. I love your writing style and am soo jealous of it. XD This story just makes this my favorie yaoi pairing from Pokemon ever. :) The detail and the fact that you gave N the HarmoniaShipping background added a lot of depth. Please keep writing! :)

OMG. l loved that!

Hehehe, one of your friends sent me a PM with your fics in it, after seeing that I liked Issushipping. I love this fanfiction! It's awesome! Keep on writing, dear.

This was extraordinary. Your talent is quite amazing.

I love the dynamic you created between Black and N (also known as I just love the way you wrote N as the uke), as well as the look into Harmoniashipping. It's so perfect—the damaged angel finding someone who would take the time and effort to fix his wings.

Anyway, I will admit that I shed a couple tears while reading this. A lot of the dialogue was very powerful, very emotive. The line "I'll show you I'm a good boy. And then Black will love me again..." really struck something and I was nearly bawling. xD

I wish I had started playing the game with Black's character instead of White...but I love my Samurott too much to restart it. Haha.

Definitely adding to my favorites.

-Erika-

xD *squeals!* OMG! That was sooooo cute! XP

This was so fantastically written. It was so painfully fluffy. In a good way. I seriously felt my heart beat in my ears. It was also very inspiring. And it was interesting to see a more dark story in Pokemon. And I love how it didn't just focus on the sex. (Although that part was very nice. ;) ) You are an awesome author. Write a book and I hope to get a copy.

Also, this story is so going onto my favorites.

Love this story. I keep going back to it. 3

Don't worry, Hdhtjdhjrj, you'll get over it.

that was amazing! love the easy flow of it, keep it up

aww, it's so cute w

Wow, this story has a very passionate allure to it that makes people want to keep reading it more, and more! I couldn't stop reading it until the end. Although I haven't played Pokemon Black and White long enough to know Black's and N's personalities, I think yours are very beautiful and suited for the story. Very passionate love-making, I really love it. The characterisation is deep and the character's thoughts are very well put. You are gifted with the way words, of course. Hehe. (_) The grammars is very good although a little mistake in the pronunciation.

'I desperately grabbed fistfuls of his hair.' It should be 'fistful'. It's small, though.

I like your way of describing; not too complex and have long chains of words, but still deep and passionate. Keep going and good luck, Girl-Apart5! V

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How the fuck do u know this much. I need to get of the Internet. I'm only11

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How the fuck do u know this much. I need to get of the Internet. I'm only11