update please this is so funny and cute.i love it

me encantoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo espero la conti

please update thhiiiiisssss!

Interesting. I do hope you update this. :)

Light said scooby-doo XD .. I love it

waa , like this very much :)
They're so cute :) I guess it's just dog's instinct to protect something and because he's just have lightning he act that way toward her. I hope they will learn more about human and along the way love will follow.
even if it will be hard to them to understand but I think that's what make this story interesting. I expect there're a lot of funny scene in this story and cute too.
owh well , please update soon , This's really great ! continued it , please
thanks you and see ya next chapter :)

hahaha ... I like this , this great ! thanks you :)
I cant wait to go to the next chapter , so see ya :)

This is awesome! I love the way you've written them :D Plus it's a really interesting plot. Nice job!

kyaaa... so cute... need more...! XDDD

I'm begging you, why'd you stop it here, what's next? Are they going to be a lover? Are they become a truly human? Are they can back to Rufus' home? I wanna know what happen next?...And be more funny 'kay?

Cool...Please make a new chapter

funny...lmfo

funny...

LOL! Lightning's reaction when Noctis hugged her tighter was priceless. Update Soon!

A new chapter! _

I read your story long time but this is the first time i review...i like it :)

Also, huh, no wonder i didn't get any alerts, i forgot to add you

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