i love them :) their awesome and your writing style is great you really captured them well, i would read another chapter even now all this time later since you've written it

Ha.
Didn't fucking realize FF logged me out. Below was me, btw. xD

– Indie

Yo.

Yeah, so anyway, no idea how I stumbled across this but I'm so glad I did. I tend to stay away from romance-type fics – especially those with yaoi-pairing, not because I have anything against non-het pairings, but because all too often the author can't write it for shit, frankly.
But this... it was something else. It's the first I've ever read that actually had me believing in the pairing. So, kudos to you.

Am also in love with your writing style; gritty and natural, but not lacking in detail at all. Love love.

Shutting the hell up now, but I will just say that I'd love to see an update for this.
Out.

–Indie

Hi,

I love the story, please update soon!

~IMNtY

I loved it,, absolutely deserves more reviews! It was so entertaining that it kept me hanging at the edge of my seat hehe! I liked the narration especially, the characterization was alright also. Sergei and Ivan got me so sad! It's cool that you managed to keep a depressing atmosphere and include a few jokes here and there! Favorite!

What's with you guys Kai is a man and he can't love another man like Rei, HE IS NOT A GAY OKAY! Just don't pair him with Max, Rei or Tyson (Bryan and tala more sucks than anything and please don't even think about spenser). So many of girls available in that series Hilary, Mariah, Mariam, Julia just pick one and do the pairing and also pick a good plot and continue with the story. Just think of those Kai fan, I'm abig kai fan and I can't imagine kai is having sex with rei or max or Tyson. Just think about his image, it doesn't suit him. I personally like Tyson and Hilary pairing so I really would like Kai with Mariam or Julia or Methilda. even Mariah would do even though Rei and She look cute together. I really liked a story pairing Kai and Maiah the best story of my like written by lady Sapphire. Please read it and I know you will like it. I like to apologise for being rude

Wow I really liked this! I want to know if they really give each other! please update soon, and make them stay together - you can be explicit XD -

This started nice. Please update soon, I want to know what they do, and confess XD

Very good, I want to read more

It's me, your ever-loyal beta. 3 I don't have a lot of time because 7:30 is coming up fast, so I promise a more decent review on the next chapter (which you should post soon). The grammar/punctuation is all where it's supposed to be, and your descriptive skills are getting better by the paragraph. All in all, this kind of lengthy, description-delicious art is what I only aspire to. I do believe you've become a better writer than me. -has mixed feelings of pride and shame-

Anywho, you know I love you. Goodbye for now, my sweet, pretty wife!

-POO