Reviews for Champion of Olympus: The Maze of Death |
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TF10 chapter 4 . 3/25 change the parentage of reyna to bellona |
Magical mortal chapter 24 . 12/28/2018 ON WITH THE NEXT STORY! I HAVE NO FEEDBACK! ITS AMAZHANG! |
Magical mortal chapter 16 . 12/28/2018 I have to write a review right here in the middle of reading, but Kottos and Gyges being reunited just warms my very cold heart, I absolutely love how you wrote it, and kudos to Starlit Reader, I dunno what you edited, but I need to give credit to the both of you. Absolutely amazing chapter. |
Plumpy chapter 1 . 8/1/2017 idk man, if Percy got the gods powers even though Poseidon only had them for that one night, then wouldn't it make sense that he would be immortal because Sally was immortal until she and Poseidon *cough* finished *cough* on that night? plus biologically speaking, the egg that would have been fertilized would be an "immortal" egg. Anyway I get why you did it this way, and it's your story but like realistically, he would be deadass immortal. |
McCree chapter 6 . 4/6/2017 "You have until noon on the day after the summer solstice. Percy will be ready to return at high noon." ITS HIGH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNN |
Puppy 17 chapter 11 . 4/3/2017 AWESOME ENTERENCE PERCY! |
mikeybtkd chapter 2 . 12/6/2016 I love this series and I read often, but you said that Bobby is a son of Minerva, but in Roman mythology Minerva was a maiden Goddess. I know that this is a fan fiction and all, but it still bugs me. I like the story so far though. |
mikeybtkd chapter 2 . 12/6/2016 I love this series and I read often, but you said that Bobby is a son of Minerva, but in Roman mythology Minerva was a maiden Goddess. I know that this is a fan fiction and all, but it still bugs me. I like the story so far though. |
Guest chapter 4 . 12/5/2015 Mind power needed in Percy |
MAL-DaughterofChaos chapter 22 . 10/17/2015 Isn't Percy technically a god cuz Sally wasn't a mortal...? |
Forgotmypassword chapter 22 . 8/1/2015 Loki: "I take no orders from the likes of you, Greek." Hm, sounds like Octavian. |
Forgotmypassword chapter 2 . 8/1/2015 I don't really like that there are Romans in this but, hey, no one is just gonna read your mind and write your "perfect" fanfic, right? Also, many a time in this chapter I was just like, "Hold up! But... Wha?" Then I would take some deep breaths. "It's just an AU." Anyway, good job! |
WiseGirl5231 chapter 5 . 7/10/2015 Bobby can't be a son of Minerva since she is a maiden goddess. There were no children of Minerva at Camp Jupiter in the Heroes of Olympus series. Sorry it was just bugging me. |
WiseGirl5231 chapter 4 . 7/10/2015 Reyna is a daughter of Bellona, the Roman goddess of war. She is not a daughter of Apollo. |
SiriuslyPink chapter 24 . 6/27/2015 Tbh the Norse crap ruined the story for me. Can't go on to the last fic. |