absolutely loved this.

I wish I had a brother/sister like Dean.

I have a severe case of asthma and I can understand Sammy very well. The portrayal of an attack was perfect. I love it.

Beautifully written, I loved it. :)

ohhh that was so sweet and well written! Love it!

Oh my goooooooosh this was adorable and perfectly schmoopy. I wish I had a big brother like Dean. I think of this every time I have an asthma attack tbh.

amazingg story

I've probably read this a thousand times and every time it just gets a little better. Keep up the good work, you're amazing

they are adorable

I love this more every time I read it. It's so accurate! If only I could find myself a Dean... :)

I actually read this a while back, but for some reason did not review, so here it is. I loved this. It is one of my favorite stories that I come back and read consistently. This one really struck a chord with me because my own little brother struggles with asthma, and I can remember sitting with him while he struggled to breathe into a mask. So thank you. I thought this was beautiful and well written and truly speaking of the brothers' relationship.

Do you have athsma or do you just do your research? Impressive. Love this fic! You're awesome! So cute. And you know what? From start to end, I couldn't breathe.

Yay, another fanfic! You are my favorite supernatural author and I love it whenever I see you've written another teen!chesters hurt/comfort fanfic. This was really good, and it had a lot of suspense and a sense of urgency. (I was so afraid Dean wouldn't make it in time) I love the concept, and while the phrase "He couldn't breathe" was a bit repetitive, it worked. It was a great writing technique that really made readers feel Sam's panic. The ending was absolutely adorable! Wonderful job, and I hope you write more fanfics soon, maybe another in this same AU. (Love the reference to the flashback in 1.18, Something Wicked) You are an awesome writer!

It's so true, the 'can't breathe' bit. You wrote it really well. Thanks :)

I like your style of writing quite a bit and your descriptions made it really easy to lose yourself in the flow of the story. I'll definitely check out your other stories as well! )