Lovely.

Touching and beautifully written. I love that instrospective look into Faces psyche, when his "mask", his guard is down, and he is so vulnerable. Thanks!

Good story...the guys want to be there for Face if Face will just let them in and finally he does

Wow. This was very intense and moving. Face's interaction with Mrs. Hicks in In Plane Sight is one of my favorite Face moments. This was a wonderful extrapolation from that scene.

*sniff*

great writing - hit my heart.

Aw. That was...bittersweet. I'm glad you expanded on that scene. The look Face gave the old lady always got me in that episode. It's nice seeing the guys take care of their own. Well done!

i always did think the kitchen scene was sad. Poor Face. He may not of had a family. But he found one in the team and they want him. Thats all that really matters.

Loved this.

This was very emotional but it was brilliant. Thanks so much for sharing.

Aw, I loved this! Very well written with a great POV.

I loved this. In Plane Sight was one of my favourite episodes, for this very reason. I loved how you expanded on the episode, really explored Face's feelings. Poor guy.

~Lily

Wow! You just made me cry with this. So beautiful...

Good job!

Love

Clara

Amazing, that was just amazing! I choked up but it was so good! I love it!

This was a great story. I had tears in my eyes. I wish the episode would have been like this.

I really enjoyed this. Your characters have good voices - it was almost like watching them on the tv.