| Reviews for The White Rose |
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Mudit chapter 20 . 7/1 I have been reading this during this quarantine time and I just have to say that this has been the most fun I had. I dont know if you would read my review because its been 9 years but i just want to say that I loved this story. Thank you for taking out the time to write this beautiful story. I had been searching for muggle au stories for a long time and I can say with a confidence that this is one of the best in the category and has become one my favourite stories. Thank you ! |
andthisisabitofboth chapter 20 . 10/16/2019 I don't know if you still check these reviews all these years later, but it would be remiss of me to not at least try to tell you how fantastic and beautiful this story is. You really did such an incredible job! I have been reading fic for well over a decade, and your story now ranks among my all time favorites. Thank you for your time, creativity, effort, and for sharing your work. I'm now adding your other works to my TBR list! |
Romione4ever chapter 20 . 1/27/2018 This was so good, I loved it was amazing, so sweet you are a fantastic writer this was spectacular. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2017 Hello. I once read this story a while back, maybe about a year ago. Back when i was a ronmione shipper. In my heart I knew it wasn't my OTP and I switched to dramione. Now I've been reading many many dramione fics but I don't know, I couldn't help but think back to this fanfiction. It may not have thousand upon thousands of reviews but it still is one of the most well written ones I've read. I've come back to read this story despite my ship changing yet i still read this with the hope of Ron and hermione finally getting together. I'm sorry to say I still don't ship them but I just wanted to thank you for this wonderful story you have created for all of us. Thank you :) |
jess.firework chapter 18 . 3/30/2017 Reading chapter 18 listening to music is a bad combination. A sad song started playing and Romione were saying goodbye...I cried. I guess that's a good thing as an author though, you want your readers to feel the story in their hearts! |
JoorayssicPark chapter 20 . 5/12/2016 One of the amazing Romione stories that I've ever read! Definitely one of my favourites! Gosh, I hope you'll keep on writing. |
JoorayssicPark chapter 18 . 5/12/2016 this chapter is the saddest thing ever! Gosh, I can't believe that I would be able to finish reading the whole chapter. |
JoorayssicPark chapter 1 . 5/10/2016 I just started reading this story and I am really amazed by how well you wrote it. Good job! |
Bookworm742 chapter 20 . 3/31/2016 That was the most beautiful thing I have ever read I was in tears when hermione had to go home u absolutely loved it especially the little bit adout scorpius and rose at the end |
Guest chapter 14 . 3/12/2016 Loved seeing Ron's gift it was positively lovely and the way Hermione got it is what made all the better. Ha Snape can't gave out detention's for smiling. Draco is a good for nothing lower then low flee bitten looser who cheats when he can and bulls those who are defenseless just so he can fell like he something. I wonder we he and the rest of his We are mightier then thou attitude friends, will wake up and see that they are causing themselves nothing but trouble. Why did Draco and Tyger even thought that cheating like that was a good idea. Did it do them favors? Nope not a one they unable to please for the rest of the season,the got 200 points taking away from them and (I haveto say that I agree with Ron about it being priceless) they were drag off the football field by the ears. No wonder there were moor people clearing for Gryffindor. |
Guest chapter 13 . 3/12/2016 LOVED what Ron did for Hermione on their date he reallyis a charming go Hermione that pig-headed git got what was coming to him. It a shame that Snape had to come out just so as it ended but at less it was only 2 hours and Ron was there poor fellow didn't do anything worng . It is true that Draco meanest just came out at word fom but it was still very rude and disrespectful and because of that he she have gotten something too but of voucher didn't. I hope there comes a day that both hatefulness and disrespect whether it by word's or something else that they both will be taking seriously. |
Guest chapter 12 . 3/5/2016 I feel sorry for Elspeth friend it is sad that she had no one around her husband died. I'm glad that Elspeth felt self enough to go tout Bath and be with her friend in her time of need. That is once she was reassured by Hermione that she and Emma would be okay on their own. Hermione parents must have had a lot of trust in Hermione to live here taking care of Emma's alone at the age of 13 for a week or more. In other saying that I dount trustHermione hack I bet that Hermione was very grownup for her ages ( just like she was is in the moves) but 13th is kinda Yung to be taking care of a little kind for a week or two alone. Poor Emma. Being sick like that is not fun. Hermione did very good with her throw out the night and I have no doubt that she would have dune equally as well that morning with out Ron's helpbut I'm happy that he did come over and help Hermione out it obvious from both of there POV'S thatshe needed it. It is also obvious that Hermione appreciate it. Ron great in this chapter (not that he been bad in the previous chapter's) the way he Wachovia Emma do Hermione could sleep a little and mad at puppet with one of Emma's old socks to play with her and makeher lough the was sweet. I'm glad that Emma'so sickness did not last to long at all. I'm happy that Molly isn't mad at Ron for missing classesto help out Hermione. And I LOVE the fact that Ron change for the better is thinks to Hermione. And now he is even starting to like school although that could be because he is excited to see Hermione. I like the way he as her out and that he offered to go to the playground with her and Emma. If he keep this up he going to have Emma even adoring him even more then she already does (oh and that go's for Hermione too) which is also obvious. Awesome Harry and Genny have a date yeeppe. |
Guest chapter 11 . 3/2/2016 I have never been good at snowball fights or making snow ball's for that matter but. Once when I was in my earlyteens or nearly there my cousins Taylor, Parker, and Preston were having a snowball fight and show me by myself and ask if I whatever to join them I say I wasn't any good at throwing but I could help make them so I was the snowball macker while they were the snowball fighters. That was fun the funnest thing about that was when our grandma came out and told the boys that the should be more like me and not fight I was behind a tall brush will I was making the snowballs so she did not she me. When one of my cousins pointed out that I was making the snowballs I stud up and said hi. Grandma was like not you too and I was like yes me too. I like all Hermione gifts especially the jumper from Molly that is a very sweet gift and also a time-consuming one and Crookshanks from Ron. I'm glad that little Emma had a good time with Bill two girls. Awesome Hermione kiss Ron that so sweet. And the felling you have Hermione and you too Ron is a strong felling of liking for the other one. I like this chapter so very very much. Emma was great at picking out Hermione outfit that adorable little girl. |
Guest chapter 10 . 3/1/2016 Love this chapter. Loved what Hermione said to Malfoy why he kept on offending Ron and his family as well as herself. Loved that Hermione stopped Ron for doing something to Malfoy (that he would suretenly deserve) that he would regret latter on. Love (this is not rely to do with this chapter. But she doing it so it's in the review for this chapter) Hermione sung quietly when she's happy and how caring she is with Emna. Abalutley patativly LOVE Ema a especially when she kick Do for gaping Hermione ruffley by the shoulder. Love the game and the Potter's, Weasley's, Lovegood's, and Granger's celebrateshen luncheon and party. |
Guest chapter 9 . 2/29/2016 I love waking up happy it so much bett then wakeing upon the worng side of the bed. Heat Snape but out of respect for Alan Rickman for I like him (Yesterday was the Oscars Award's. He along with many others were remembered) will not say anything more then that. Draco is an ass he and his I am holyer then you attitude mack me abalutley patativly sick. He is an ginormous pathetic git and if his anything more like the real Draco then he aready is then he also coweredly. Trealwney is a bit of a nut job isn't she? Lovethe outing that Hermione,Ron, and Harry had after school. It was nice of the Weasley's twins to drop them off at Emma's preschool so Hermione could make sure that Emma was with Aunt Elspeth as well as a school if it okay that she take a walk and hang out with Harry and Ron. I like that they had a lot of fun I like The story if the Riddle house and Tom. I wounder if there be more manchening of him in thus stand if so how. Should have kept you mouth shut Harry. Your dad's right that was your own foult. Aww Ron help Hermione from trippingand she gave him a look. And with that he remembering that look he didn't end up arguing with Molly when she fuss apt him for being late. Hopefully Hermione will brang out more of his good side. Sorry for any muss spelling I'm the worst with that. |