GREAT STORY SO FAR :)

Oh wow what will she do now

100 years - OK I missed something - wow - she's been wondering around that long. GREAT story. more please and SOON. Thank you.

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Mallory seems to be taking thing well so far... Bella seems like she is fixing to crack though.

Wow. That ending was so... somber. Sad. :/

Update soon! Write On ~BMB

I loved it she is like death nothing but dead in her wake

thank's
can't wait for more

Aww, Jackson's completely smitten. :3 Although, I don't think Bella's making it difficult.

Update soon! Write On ~BMB

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Oh yes she is now will Edward come looking for her

It would seem the only thing she has carried over into her vampire life from her human one are all the words that Edward said to her when he left. She is progressing from the wild thing she was to something more sedate. She isn't lusting after human blood so much and seemed to take to the animal blood alright. Wonder what is wrong with the girl if Bella can smell medicine in her blood... Mallory doesn't seem to be afraid of her or find her different~

thank you, the story is flowing so nicely - I love your twist - till very interesting; love you use of words! (typos: 1. and fry my red lips 2. civilsation (should be civilization) 3. Mallory returned promptly, shoving a )))

Funny how she reminisces about a fairy tale, comparing her life, this is brilliant!

Oh my, I hope she does not let her demon get the child.
What is she hearing in the woods?
Hmmmmm... Thank you.
(very good Beta - no errors that I see up to this chapter)