Reviews for Innocent Sin
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2019
Hey I know this is probably super awkward to hear or whatever, but this was super passionate and just left me feeling happy after reading it. It was lovely and very cute.
TheBraveGallade chapter 1 . 6/13/2016
Those dots man. until that moment she said he stopped breathing, I had NO idea that this was AFTER he sealed nyx away.
I want to see a continuation of this. minato still has a year of schooling after all, now he's alive.
I wonder what everyone's reaction will be. kenji is going to be so jealous that minato landed a teacher lol.
Guntherson962 chapter 1 . 1/20/2016
That right there was a thing of beauty, there is so little of this pairing out there and I thank you for it.
Awareness Bringer chapter 1 . 1/11/2016
Those two together would've been perfect in game.
Retainablue chapter 1 . 9/13/2015
Quagmire would be proud
Anime PJ chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
Minato Arisato: the only person in history to beat death with sex.

Kidding aside, the story itself is beautiful. I wish there were more Minatio/Toriumi pairings on here from what I can see, there's only the two.

Instant favourite!
justsomerealguy chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
Great story! I'm surprised that this is the only Minato/Toriumi pairing on here. And much better ending than in the game, for both the and the games ending. If Minato still had Personas and Links at that point then the Hermit link most definitely would have broken with the way it was handled gamewise. But with the way you have written it here I feel sure it just went from MAX rank to ULTIMAX. Also nice spacing with the death/coma suspense. All it took to save him from said fate was his teacher's love and some sex. :'3
FuyuSeishin12 chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
Very well written, and quite hot near the end. The twist to the original ending where Minato "dies" ( Spoiler: More like lapse into a coma-like state as Elizabeth attempts to revive him as told in P3Fes: The Answer.) Is a nice touch/

Anyways, we should need more on this pairing, seriously.
Aru chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
omfg I love you for making this T-T
MirageSPL chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
So. Fucking. Adorable. Please excuse my language. I wish she was datable. Next to Yukari, she's up there on the top.
ComicoDivino chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
My God, That was perfect, I'll be honest going into this story I was more than a little skeptical, Minato x Toriumi isn't really one of my main pairings, but this story really made me wish they had added it to P3, It was masterfully written, the Lust oozing off at the right moments, the tenderness and massive amount of masculinity just flowing right off of Minato, this is something I shall aspire to reach in my own writing. 10/10 Just Perfect.
Arawn D. Draven chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
Good story! It's a shame that there aren't many with Isako and Minato together. Well, Good job!
Athulis chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Far too few fics of this shipping. Greatly enjoyed reading and I hope you consider writing more of this couple. Keep up the great work.
RayLedgend chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
I was reading this, and I just felt like after they finished their fuck session, it would have been hilarious if the police barged in and arrested Ms. Toriumi. She'd be all confused and scared, and main character would just stand there with a smirk on his face. She'd start to cry as the police handed him a briefcase full of money and thanked him for helping catch her. You see, she would be a known pedophile, as her IP address was found looking at shotacon porn, or whatever the underage boy shit is called, practically nightly, but they needed proof that she was actually sleeping with underage children. Of course, that brings up the issue of corruption in the police if they bribed a child to enter a technical rape situation just to catch and arrest a pervert, but the courts wouldn't care at all. In fact, they'd commend the police for going that extra mile. The less perverts on the street, the better, after all. And that, my friends is how Ms. Toriumi ended up in prison for the rest of her life.

At least that's the end I was imagining while I approached the end of this P Overall the story was decently written, but having the entire thing being in first person made it a little confusing to follow when Toriumi was actually talking and when she wasn't. Maybe that's just me, but it was my major problem with the story.
Grey Wolf4 chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
I like this fic with Minato and Ms. Toriumi and this was pretty good and you've done it well.
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