| Reviews for Inside You So Deep |
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  Okay den chapter 2 . 10/13/2019 *yells extremely loudly* |
| Okay den chapter 1 . 10/13/2019 Hell yah |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/7/2018 I love this! Great job with the French and Ozzy slang, and I loved the personalities. 10/10 |
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/1/2016 Very nice fanfic! I had a good time reading it and I loved how you made sniper dream and then flow into reality with spy being there, also I died a little when spy told sniper he moans in his sleep ahahah Some points of attention if any, -Their headquarters is called tueford if I'm not mistaken -I'd switch the accent fonetic spelling of maite with mate, since most people already read it with that dialect Other than that great fic and keep it up! :) |
| Catylina Storm chapter 2 . 2/10/2016 THAT WAS THE MOST FUCKING FANTASTIC PIECE OF WRITING I HAVE EVER READ! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/18/2015 /yells at ya/ THAT WAS HONESTLY AWESOME. BOTH IN THE FIRST CHAPTER AND THE SECOND ONE YOU TRANSITIONED REALLY NICE, IT WASNT LIKE JUMPING FROM |
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/15/2015 ... WHAT IS THIIIIIS! Why is a RED spy in love with a BLU sniper?! |
 iioatsu chapter 2 . 9/6/2015 YELLS AT YOU! i loved this so much jfc thank for blessing my soul u_u |
| Zilkenian chapter 2 . 7/30/2015 I YELL AT YOU! Now lets see if you know why, hehehe... |
| Rose chapter 2 . 10/12/2014 * NOOOOOOOSE BLEEEEEEEED * OMFG I'M DYING. ("And then I forgot how to write porn" XD ) |
| Flaming Skulls chapter 2 . 3/10/2014 Great fic, love it x3 |
| mignoneroy20 chapter 2 . 11/16/2013 *yells* AWESOME. This story is old but I don't care, blame Google for showing me old things (nah jk) This is just perfect. I always liked SniperxSpy. For the French part, it's pretty messy and I know it, I'm French :l but here's what I propose for this part: Je tiens à te dire que j'ai eu le béguin pour toi pendant quelque temps... Et ce n'est pas qu'une "relation d'une nuit"... In fact "one-night stand" doesn't really have a great-great translation but we can still get "aventure d'un soir" with the context. Keep this good work! *thumbs up* |
| nope chapter 2 . 10/23/2013 this was reallllly great! You're writing is very entrancing, I could totally see it happening in my head :3 thanks. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/29/2013 LEEEEROOOOY JEEEEEENKIIIIINSSSS! |
| ashes.to.ashes96 chapter 2 . 6/20/2013 This. This was cute. It really was. after the sex, I was all like "D'aww, stop it you two :3" and totally wanted to slap them for being so cute! As for the French, the second sentence wasn't too bad, I was about to understand it, but the first part made no sense to me (especially because of the lack of space between toi and pendant). But I Google Translated it and saw what you were trying to say. my French is pretty juvenile, but I think an easy way to say "I really want" would be 'je tiens'. But idk. I barely know french so... Ignore me xD |
