This is a great story. I have just rewatched B5 and noticed all the similarities between it and Mass Effect. I am sorry for whatever made you abandon it, wish you could have finished it.

Really wish this story had been continued

"Not that the rest of the vessel was trouble free"

Intentionally or unintentionally, you're recycling battle footage.

Then again, Star Trek did it in actual MOVIES with the BOP explosions.

I know it's been years since this was last updated, but it bothered me.

Great story. Too bad it died...

Sadly this excellent story will never be finished.

This can't be all of it! Please update!

Oh No! I'm up to date. Need more. This is a really good story and I would like more please.

No sharidan star killer. Shame.

I do very much like the blending of the two series by having Earth be on the outskirts of both meta civilisations so that this explains why they've never interacted. You've captured the very disturbing implications of the Minbari idea of "understanding not being required, only obedience," and the violent arrogance of the Warrior Caste. The idea of telepaths being treated like biotics is also a new one as far as I know.

If you ever do return to this fic though, I would do as several others have mentioned, get a beta reader or go back over this fic looking for spelling and grammar issues. There are a few.

not a very good fic

As far I have read it, an impressive story. Too bad it isn't continued.

Okay. You've got an interesting concept, and I like what I've seen so far, but you should really find a proof reader. These chapters are all riddled with minor spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors.

Hi

With respect to the author and all readers, an anticipated future having an United Islamic Republics to be establish first and being in war with UN is questionable referring to our world ? There are many fight in our world among several parties that involved resource control mainly to be possessed by powerful company / Riches party whom will defiantly utilize bigotry in religion, loyalty to tribe instead of country citizens', ethnic cleansing, conflicting in authority in several society that vary in degree with criminal organization influence and control and other factors. Please note the long conflict in Burma" or "Myanmar" where there are there is minority persecution and nobody care about them although UN classify them as worst cases of ethnic cleansing

Normal people just want to be secure in peace and in financial aspect and therefore it is more attractive to be dreamers in fan fiction in somewhere. In fact, it is a matter of being manipulated.

Maybe the author just give an example although more possible future is natural disaster like meteor impact

Apology kindly please if that is beyond the story which is very interested

Thanks

A really interesting story that I like though I do think some of your technological assumptions are off. For one thing, simple short burst evasives would be a very successful tactic for the Minbari against accelerated weapons traveling at only .05C due to the simple fact that at the ranges you have been working on here, the ships would have at least five or six seconds' warning of incoming fire. Also, I think the neutron canons are closer to the reaper style weapons than you estimate in this fic which, although clearly not as good as the reapers, would be enough to make those weapons (which I believe do travel at near light velocity) much more dangerous than you estimate. While I generally do think that the Humans as you have them set up in this fic would have a slight advantage in technology due to ME drives and shielding, I think the balance would be far far closer to even than most of your chapters portray. Its clear you've stopped work on this fic but if you do ever work on it or open it up for someone else to take over (not interested too much going on in my own life), I would encourage you/them to think through the technological issues mentioned here... The ME folks did think these through I think, since most of their battles happened at close range.
Thanks for your hard work on this, quite the entertaining read.

Damn. And it cuts off right at a cliffie.

Very awesome fic. I'd love to see more if you decide to write it.