This is the best ES21 oneshot i've ever read. Very impressing me deeply. Great job.

I wish there were more chapters but it's good

Ooo that was kinda hot. Aha! Love it!

I liked your story...I love them both too...can you make more?

Keep writing!:)

Hello, I enjoyed your fiction and I wish I could translate it into french (We don't have a lot of fictions with this couple...)

So ... Can I have your permission? :)

I can also translate the reviews and send them to you after.

I wait your answer

:D awesome

This was a nice short story, topped off with a perfect ending, especially since I am personally horrible at short stories. Very well done. I cannot find any flaws in it.

Awesome, and well, hot! Just knew I remembered you from somewhere... I still hope you haven't dropped your other lovable fic "Desire, is Such a Strange Thing", which I've found to be delightfully different XD And, I'm faving this one too _

Very clever. I like how you built up the scene to the well written make out and topped it off with a perfect conclusion.