This chapter feels distorted and doesn't really match the pace the book was going at, we went from them starting to kiss and straight to they are having sex which is weird because there was a build-up happening and I feel like I've missed a couple of chapters for this to have gotten at this stage.
But the smut was nice I guess ;)

I’m thrilled to have randomly come across this. I have only come across literally one Jacob imprinting on Bella story, after thorough searching. Such a shame. Jacob imprinting on Bella’s infant is some shit I’ll never get over lol. That, plus I was a major Bella/Jacob shipper, so I’m so happy for this.

This is honestly a story that makes me angry in so many senses. I don't like the relationship Bella has with everyone. When a person is going through a difficult time, telling them what to do and listing everything that's wrong with them does not make things better. The only way a person can change is when they decide to and they feel ready too. I understand that everyone has their limits too. But in this case they're butting in into something that is not up to them to decide or comment. Everyone keeps telling Bella what to do, and instead of having any type of character growth, she went from depending on Edward to depending on Jacob; which is just as bad.
They all blame Edward. But the blame is actually on Bella. Again, it's something that just takes time, and she's still a teenanger.
I don't like how Emily and Jacob's father feel like they have the right to yell at her like that, especially when they hardly actually know her. There are things called limits. They want to establish theirs, but they're unwilling to respect hers.
I'm sorry, I don't like how the story is going. I won't continue reading.

Oh. You wrote a soap opera.

You know I never understood how Bella could be so dumb when it came to the wolves vs Laurent. Like she is perceived to be perceptive and smart...so why would she think that one vampire would be a match against five wolves? Especially when Laurent is retreating! Ugh, it’s not you, it’s Meyerism and the inconsistent bullshit. It’s the same with Jake’s character. She always sets up these good character descriptions and then mucks it up with unbelievable shit. But that aside, I love your story so far

Oh man Bella. Why?!

I love it

Also love this FanFiction but it’s super repetitive with everyone telling Bella how she feel towards Jacob and what she should do. Like ugh it’s

god why do men think they can control girls actions. Like that’s what I disliked about Edward always trying to get Bella to do something because he thought it was best and ignored her when she didn’t want to. Now with Jacob saying that she can’t be friends with the cullens like. Ugh men frustrate me and I’m one.

although i like that jacob imprinted on bella, i still wish he was older than bella instead of younger. i like older men. and i'm glad jacob imprinted on rennesme in the book and the film. and i also find it very disturbing and very rude that some people are very rude and swearing on the comments on the reviews! give them a break! i happen to like lots of these stories, and i plan to write my own...! GOD BLESS. JESUS CHRIST LOVES YOU...

i like it, but i always wished jacñb were ñlder than bella...

Jake the caveman, lol!

I can’t wait to see what Leah does.

Whoa! That surprised me.

Wow!