Hm, it's a very interesting story. Its sad for Natsuki but in the end Shizuru is there for her.

Just a suggestion but do a little sequel to show what the relationship between Natsuki and Shizuru after a year or so after Shizuru confessed.

to be truthful I was a bit trouble at the beginning and yes I miss the warning part~~~ but it's fresh unlike other fic I read so far just a little~~ different. I was kinda glad that Shizuru is the first girl she kiss other than her mum and she said she loves her

Wondering what you've install for us in the next chapter, will be waiting.

Very interesting! It is definitely plausable as to why she's so standoffish. Never thought to really think this way about Natsuki.. Well written! Keep up the good work!

You should make a part two.

That was...it was...kind of overwhelming! This is the first fic that I have read which involves incest between... I don't want to put any spoilers but damn that was angsty! I like your writing style!

hmm very tragic and angsty...i think it ended a little too early. it felt rushed...from 2mo to 2yrs and the story being revealed...then all of a sudden shizuru confesses her love.

hmm well, it feels like it is missing some stuff, more interaction between the two. maybe natsuki realizing she kissed the girl at 8-9 yrs of age. or something...and i think it can continue a little be more until natsuki can feel confortable in shizuru's arms...hee hee wishful thinking?

anyway, very deep and disturbing to read about natsuki being abused like that. well, it happens in real life, and i hope not in your life.

Honestly, I wasn't expecting incest until I read the warnings. Also, I'm one who isn't disturbed by incest much. Regardless, this story was very enjoyable (except what happened with Natsuki T.T It got me all teary) You should consider on writing a sequal.

if not, I'll keep an eye on your next fic

Kruger Natsuki

wow... I saw the incest warning and I was worried about reading this, but it was written so well, I don't regret it. The idea itself is quite dark and, frankly, very sad but all the more reason why this fic was enjoyable to read.(...hmmm maybe that's a bad choice of word).

Personally I like angst fics so this one-shot was a welcomed read (despite its disturbing situation) so thanks for the one shot!

Well... that was hard.

Creo que de alguna manera podría explicar la fijación que Natsuki tenía con su madre en el anime (no quiero decir que esa fuera tú intención) Pero siempre me pareció rara esa relación.

Me gustó mucho tu trabajo.

Sorry I wanted to leave a comment, but I'm not that good in english.

Well, that certainly was interesting..

Somehow, I can't find more words to say, but it was interesting.. Sure, somehow a bit sick - but also beautifully written and in it's own way also beautiful.

MsVeine

wow that was crazy but in some strange way i liked it btw u made me hate natsuki's mom

rather unusual story!

maybe it's good, you made it one-piece.

I wish there was no such thing as home violence(((

Thank you for your work!

Well, I loved it. Come to think of it, it makes sense. I hope there is a chance for something like a sequel... *hint-hint* :D