It was good
I am thinking that if she goes to the Naruto world it can be where she is reborn. That she is the reason how they end up in our world, and makes plans to counter their new ones, and over all be the one to screw them over as her revenge.

Holy. Ummm... Okay then? Good series though... That was... I'll go over here xD

they are in vegas

GASP! The summary says you're still going to write this? I can't wait! I loved this story (it was one of the first I ever read after I discovered the site) and I would really love to see a sequel. Best of luck!

I don't think you realize how many of my feels you just killed...I feel like Sasori...

PLEASE make another story but of where we head into the narutoverse! and have an OCxDeidara :3 PWEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Love this story. The ending is probably far more realistic than other people would like to admit. It's refreshing to read how things would most likely turn out. However it would be nice to read a sequel. I'm interested to see how Rachel turns out after her encounter with the Akatsuki. Will she become heartless and twisted, cold and detached refusing to trust anyone, self-hating for foolishly helping the Akatsuki and not killing them while they were in their kitten forms, or will she be vengeful and filled with righteous wrath.

when will the sequel appear? i'm dying!

This story was good but you is so messed up for this. It captured their personalities perfectly but still. At least make a sequel so she can get revenge

nice story...

This was amazing. I felt horrible for Rachel at the end. It honestly made me tear up but I loved the story. I wish it could've ended in some other way though. Like maybe Naruto and friends came and killed everyone and tada? Haha, that's a bit to far fetched, but amazing job anyways. :)

hey i just want to give you a suggistion! if you are working on the sequel you should say she went in to the naruto world and got revenge it would be bloody and gory!

when will there be a sequal

I' m seeing so many haters up in this bitch' all because it got too real for some of y'all big pussies. I see lots of redundantance and hypocrisy in comments. Many of you state your infatuation for the realism of the story. Only to later tear her a new one on how it wasn't what you wanted.

You people clearly wanted (Romance, & a Happy B.S ending). Although she herself states in the first chapter that there would not be any romance. Many of you have seem to forgotten said entry.

You women think that for example: Itachi-kun would just throw away his entire covert mission

& completely forget about Sasuke; “all because he suddenly falls in love with you” or whatever. smh v _ v

I though it was a amazing well thought out story, terrifying suspense, characters were kept

in their character, & the ending was magnificent.

Now that is all said & done:

Where the fuck are the Deleted Scenes && the Sequel you promised!

I love the story!

I hope the sequel will come out soon!