Please continue this story

Are you going to continue this story?

Awesome story, looking forward to chapter 9. Keep up the good work!

Would have liked more but thx

Interesting beginning, unreadable becausse of the mangled French accent.

Nice book, hope you are going to write soon again! Or is this story now abandond or something like that. I hope you write furthur!
Berend

Are you gonna continue this story because I like you style you are a grate wrighter

This is awesome keep it up

Wow they really are hopeless now Harry and fleur can reveal the whole thing to the press which unfortunately means skeeter

Dumbly dorr bashing and Ron bashing much

The eyes are mirrors of the soul

Hope Hermione Ron and ginny all die

'Litherin boy who just 'raduated... I couldn't keep reading when you were writing it like this. They can pronounce S and G sounds, consonants, it's only the H's that they really have trouble with, as it's written in canon, and this was impossible to get through. Also, when you had Fleur say Je 'ave not met any 'Ogwarts boys yet... After years of knowing the language, even if she spoke with an accent, she would not just replace an easy and common word like I, just as if you were speaking French and you knew the language you wouldn't say, "I suis" instead of Je suis. It's just awkward, it makes no sense why you would do that, and it's nothing like when someone will curse in their own language. I mean, if you want to have someone open up a sentence with Mon dieu or Merde, and then have them say the rest of the sentence in English, that's fine. If you're going to try to depict their french accents, at least learn what words you should use a z in front of or where to take off the first letter of a word in your writing, rather than writing sentences that are very difficult to read, and make it sound like the French students are idiots and have a very incomplete grasp of the language, rather than what it should be depicted as, which is just an accent.

You should write more

I would love to actually read this, but the bad french accent is so off-putting that I have abandoned it. Simply replacing the first letter with an apostrophe does not work.