lmaooo this is so hilarious. and falling from window based on real story. amazing

I would love to read the fall out of this

That's some awesome and juicy (hehe) stuff.
I loved this story and it was funny.:D Only Al could end up falling 40 floors while at some sexy times.

Lol. Just, lol. I was just hanging out on Tumblr and then I found this. Made my fucking morning-night!

Hasta la pasta!

I freakin' LOVE the concept of them dying and healing like- like ZOMBIE NATIONS! XD I'd love to use this concept! FREAKIN' A!

This was amazing! I love it!

How has Al held on that long? Just sayin, nice fic!

...that was...ummmm...good?..creepy...and so much more

Girl, what are you talking about failing in this one-shot. It's so good! I mean we start with romance, then BAM! Alfred falls from a 40 floor window, then we have guro, then PRUSSIA, then more guro, then romance again and all that with a lot of dark humor and... yeah... you rule Prussia's five meters. d-w-b

Would you let me translate this into spanish? I can't help myself! It's so good! -; Of course there would be disclaimers and I'll send you the link and everything!

Anyway! You rock my socks and I'm stalking you like whoa, I hope you don't mind a new crazy fan! 8D

Hello it's me me me again!

(I know I write my review in a short amount of time, but I read your fanfiction yesterday night. Or today really early, depends on your perspective. ) ANYWAY. PLEASE-PLEASE. CAN I TRANSLATE/ADAPTE THIS FANFICTION IN FRENCH?

It's really fun and awesome and sexy and perfect! I really fell in love with it and I'm willing to do ANYTHING to have the right to translate/adapte it.

Please. Please. Please. Please. Pllllllease.

Thank you for being that awesome, sorry for my grammar and all that stuff. I should focus more on what I'm writing rather than being with a gooffy smile on my face. ... That didn't mean anything but IIIII understand myself. Which is something good. For my life. And future. Why am I writing this? No idea.

PLEASE TELL ME I CAN!

See you! And write more, you awesome you.

I love your headcanon about them being able to die. Up till now, I just figured they were immortal. You version is much more... macabre, but I like it!

Read this on DA. So brilliant! Love the concept of his death and regeneration *are they time lords? xD*

Really funny,too :)*clap clap*

Unrelated to the review, but I'm beginning to think the whole "I apologize for writing so much fail" line (and various versions of it) is about like the fanfiction writer's version of how, in some cultures, people will apologize for things they need not (such as in China, providing a large meal and apologizing for it being so little) because it is a form of customary humility. I don't know when we writers started to develop that trait -as it has been around since before I started reading fics back in 2005- but it's just interesting. I'm beginning to think I should put together a Fanfic Writers' Code of all these little customs.

Now...Review time!

The writing style is exactly what I would call "good fanfic format": too well-developed to be a drabble yet just informal enough below novel format. In other words, short story format. You managed to start with an intimate scene, follow up with horror and a bit of morbid/ironic comedy, then come full circle and back to the romance again. I think you stayed rather in-character with everyone, as well, considering the story. Plus, I just find the mental image of someone going from "smexy tiems" to SPLAT! really amusing; seriously, it'd actually be interesting to see someone draw this, at least in part. Another amusement factor was Prussia just appearing out of nowhere and starting to freak/rant. Pretty in-character there, down to the random appearance.

Anyway, congratulations on a well-written oneshot. This is going in my favs, heh. Hope that makes your day as much as this did for me.

wow i read this on deviant art so i just wonted to review this cause its so frigin awsome man u r really good. u sould be a book writer

And because Alfred had threatened dragging him up into space to have sex in null gravity unless he complied. Ivan imagined such an act would be difficult to perform and put Alfred deeper into debt.

You call this fail? I'll never forgive you for calling this a fail. This was the polar lpposite of a fail - Idk what thta is thoughXD