I love the concept. I wish it was longer though good story. I'm surprised I haven't seen any others use it before.

Ah, no no no no no no no no no no no no no, Barney should have a miserable childhood, so that he and Ted can become besties (hmhm, and Marshall, of course)!

Interesting...and you caught the characters' personalities very well. Especially Marshall's. :D

I have read so many of your stories, it's not even funny. I've been meaning to comment for a while, but never got around to it. Ah, well, c'est la vie.

It took me an embarrisingly long time (and a look at your reviews) to realise the importance of September, which made this fic go from bittersweet to outright tragic.

You just kicked me in the throat. I hope you're happy.

"...in September everything changes..."

Wow...that was depressing.

Regardless, this story is great. It was short, but really well written. This version of Barney was interesting.

That's a good story. But, sad cause they only met for a second. Great story!

"...in September everything changes..."

whoa. i put 2 and 2 together and my mind was blown. great little moment here. love me some au barney3

Different! Nice work!(:

Gasp-I really, really realllly enjoyed this piece.

One question-why is it under 'angst'?

But w/e, it was just so cute and kind awesome.

XD

Thanks for making my day

This was very lovely D

Wonderful!

That was definitely different, in a good sort of way. If this were to be continued, I'd definitely be interested in seeing what happened between the Slutty Pumpkin and Ted - did they get married? Did Ted ever meet Barney again?

Very good idea.

Oh wow. I'm intruiged. I love this idea, and I loved the end of the chapter- it was just so clever.