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Crazyrebelscarves chapter 1 . 2/3/2012 THE ULTIMATE CREYES3 |
KrystalFruit22 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011 This is so preeeeettty ]. I don't wanna sound like an English teacher, but you have really nice, powerful imagery in here. It just makes everything sound really beautiful and pleasant. The only mistakes I noticed (and the first one was probably the site's fault, knowing how things can sometimes get screwed up in the document uploads section) was that Relax: Lily of the Valley was the same as Wish: Rainfall. And I think in Hope: Gingerbread Cookie, you meant "fateful battle" as opposed to "faithful battle." But anyways, I really like this, keep writing Kataang! |