Ooh, this is so freakin' good!

This is a fine piece. Strong voices and lyrical text; the emotions have heft. Thanks for sharing. :)

This was perfectly in character. Dean being worried but at the same time pissed at himself about John, who cares but was stern and Sam being bitchy but not really because Dean was the same way was perfect. I have nothing to say other than you should be very proud of this piece of writing. It's awesome.

Lovely piece...

It is no wonder Sam has to get out of this mess of a life.

This is very good. You captured the Winchesters personality perfectly.

Like your story!

What a wonderful story. Thank you so much for sharing! _

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But but but SAM. Arggh, the forces which seperate these brothers are cruel and heartless (I'm looking at John).

I love your writing, please tell me there is somewhere else I can read more of it :)

awesome story! Really enjoyed it, especially the ending when John comes around.

I loved it! i mean it.. first I hate john but at the end he was sooooooooooooo cute and i loved the way he said to dean"i'll always be there" just without really saying it!... great I love it

I KNOW that there's more, right? Surely, you're getting ready to post a continuation right...about...NOW! Soon?

Aww cute ending

John was probably feeling guilty for not noticing... xD At least I hope he was!

Kisses and I liked it

See ya

Rosetta

So good to see you back! Quality writing is so hard to find. Thank youf for this delicious story.

As usual another great story! I am always happy to see that a story has been written by you. I know that it is going to be awesome even before I read it. Please keep them coming.