| Reviews for New Perfect |
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   dazzleglo chapter 2 . 8/19/2019 Sweet story loved it |
| dazzleglo chapter 1 . 8/19/2019 Loved this one shot. . |
| strawberryxcream chapter 1 . 6/13/2019 I love this so much! Carlisle and Bella's relationship makes me cry Please write more stories focusing on Carlisle, Bella and Jasper! |
| dinotopian chapter 2 . 2/26/2019 Thank you! |
| story2tell chapter 2 . 4/19/2014 Love! |
| Jessica chapter 2 . 11/27/2013 Loved it! Classic Bella, to injure herself during a nightmare. A little suggestion: when you're writing in 3rd person, it can be distracting to read more than one person's thought/feelings. If you want to enter another person's mind it's best to have a page break, either a typed line or a new chapter. I know "3rd person omniscient" is a valid style but I'm my opinion it's a little confusing. Also I love the Jasper/ Bella bonding! Nice work. |
| BridieM chapter 2 . 11/24/2013 Most enjoyable. Thank you. :) |
| BridieM chapter 1 . 11/24/2013 A lovely chapter. Well written. :) |
| crotia chapter 2 . 10/8/2013 cute |
| neverknewme chapter 1 . 8/8/2013 "Bella's utter fragility and complete trust in him touched Carlisle deeply. For a few moments he could not speak. Tenderly he cupped her cheek in his hand, seeing the vulnerability in her eyes. She needed an honest answer from him, objective proof that she was not flawed." Thank you for making my day with such a beautiful moment. :) You should write more Carlisle/Bella! |
| EmilyF.6 chapter 2 . 5/10/2013 This was such a great story! i love to read about Carlisle and Jasper, and I'm glad Edward was there for a bit too! :) |
| Narges chapter 2 . 3/11/2013 nice :) |
| Clarity's Illusions chapter 2 . 3/2/2013 I'm always up for Carlisle/Bella fluff! This was a truly wonderful story, and Jasper was so great. |
| bananafox chapter 2 . 2/4/2013 very sweet. i like bella/carlisle and bella/jasper bonding. |
| pudget12 chapter 2 . 5/9/2012 lovely story, brought me to tears. |
