Lol my phone was on 69% when I read this chapter.

this is soo cute

You know, this would be easier to read if you didn't make Harry look like an EMOTIONALLY MANIPULATIVE RAPIST IN ALMOST EVERY CHAPTER. 'Well oh, it's BDSM' and 'oh it's just a story, why are you so mad.' Stories like this give BDSM a bad name, and I don't give a duck if Draco's "enjoying" it or not. A rapist can make their victim orgasm/feel good because that's the body's NATURAL RESPONSE TO STIMULUS. It doesn't make a rapist any less of a fucking rapist.

This plot has potential, but quite frankly that shit doesn't matter at this point because all you've made Harry into a piece of shit who doesn't take into account all of the emotional damage he could be doing to Draco sexually, all because 'Draco's in denial.' Fucking bullshit.

How annoying and sick your Potter is. He's harassing a person who doesn't want it and has a nerve thinking himself noble. Wtf. I know it's a fantasy about submitting, but you're doing it wrong. Potter's behaviour is unacceptable, sick and not at all "sexy". Poor Malfoy.
I stopped reading because Potter's annoying and perverted behaviour just turns me off.

McGonagall told them to write an essay about POSITIVE attributes of the other person. Potter just made poor and amateur attempt in psychoanalysis and added his wishful thinking about Malfoy wanting submission. If I were McGonagall, I wouldn't pass this out.

Well who was his first

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Amazing story! Thank you!

So fucking hot

Aww, poor Draco

loved it and thank you

thank you

thanks for the chapter and story keep up the great work

thanks keep up the great work

getting good