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Loved this fic
Loved that you showed off the serious nanoha rather than the fluffy cute one
That’s the one I like to read about
And how you limited her in logical ways

Delightful

interesting. defenitey got better as things went on, and i see that Kingsley is gonna pay forward Nanoha's Tor-traning. quite the interesting story.

Lol. I thought the shield charm created a sort of flat plane to block spells, not just a bullet like thing though?

I would like to see a strong friendship with Harry to begin with but I wonder if her friends will find out about this.

I like the story overall my only complaint about Nanoha is the rumor that she is a lesbian is there any proof on this.

I actually want for the part of this fic to start a romantic relationship with any male.

I want to call bullshit. Avada Kedavra should.. probably kill Nanoha..? It kind of ruins the danger of the spell and the value of it.

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nanoha is overpowered

I won't lie, the story itself wasn't that appealing. The humor on the other hand? Perfect. While I barely know anything about HP, I found Nanoha to be right at home with the setting (if not a bit too talkative about external affairs) and it was highly amusing watching her turn a group of untrained kids into a fighting force worthy of being called an army.
The only thing I'm super disappointed by is the lack of Voldemort getting punched in the face. Harry should've 'befriended' him.

Love this story!

Loved the story and enjoyed every single chapter. Was very interesting and exciting to read. Well done. :)

Those poor Auror candidates...
And those not-so-poor Death Eaters who will become snacks after Caro buys enough Belkan barbecue sauce for her dragons...

I always think Albus decision to keep the prophecy from Harry is for his peace of mind. Imagine at age 11 and you have to think that you have to duel and kill a Dark Wizard stronger than you which is equal to suicide. Not something you want to tell to child, you will ruin their future. Albus keeping secret is to keep Voldemort blind. He need to fool his allies before he can fool his enemies. And for the Gaunt ring? He was probably researching if there is a way to destroy a Horcrux without destroying the vessel. As for placing Harry with the Dursley, it is more because of Lily's protection for defenceless Muggle sister and her family as well as Harry, thus killing two birds with one stone. Not to mention just because V's dead does not mean there are no crazies who won't hunt Harry down. Aftermath of war is more messy than the war itself. So in all honesty better that Harry is miserable but alive than tortured and dead.

Overall, I enjoyed the story and will hope you will write more like this.

Maybe a similar crossover but perhaps made Harry's survival of the AK as a sign for his potential as mage but his magic was exhausted by the AK thus his rather weak wizard magic? Just a thought. I though you did awesome with this crossover. Because throughout this story you never mentioned how mage are discovered and how that makes them different from wizards other than larger magic/stronger core. So doesn't that mean a wizard born is also potential mage? You did mention that and I found the idea intriguing but since I am not a true Nanoha fan, I won't give the crossover justice.

This story is a gem. A rough, uncut gem... But still a gem, a precious stone. When it started, you fell to the common trap of bad exposition. But around halfway, it started to get good, and by the end, I was hooked. It was definitely amusing to see how Nanoha's training can break the rules of magic. Despite you saying that you won't post anything anymore, I'm still adding you to my following in hope for that 'Enforcer Potter' sequel.

Oh, and another thing about the last chapter. You did not mention anything about the Quidditch games... Or what happened with those who Umbridge banned.