Rogue, not rouge. He's out of control, not wearing too much makeup. :)

Also, really enjoying your work.

I have to say I read to only chapter 3 im so confused it feels like its been thrown in to so many different times and its messing me up

Why - after your Shadowbroker (end of ME2... go back... it... doesn't work for me (I know that often a "flashback" chapter can make sense - but, the reason for the sequence jump is not clear to me -
are these chapters complete, btw? I guess I won't get that answer. They are fairly short - sort of like outline forms... but better than plenty of other material, in terms of the writing ;-)

I take it the author enjoyed the series thoroughly - as did I. I must be honest - right now, when I am just "wrapping up" my ME3 playthrough - as a Paragon M-Shep who has loved Liara T'soni - my Bondmate (though we are waiting until after ... well... I guess I probably won't be confident enough to write any fanfic about it... otherwise I'd be marrying my Liara too ;-) Fortunately, each is in a separate parallel universe - such that my Liara and yours are two separate Asari Jewels... yeah - man - it is strange as hell. I'm used to feeling a _little_ bit of .. something akin to attachment - for the special girl in the movie I recently watched, or even the book I read.. .but this - this 3-installment, six-year, 150.. no, 200 hour adventure? You know - I just can tell that you know what I'm saying. How can a bunch of pixels, a decent but just-ok writing team (theyre great, but.. trying to please the newcomers - messed up the experience for us loyal Liara-mates, eh? To have her repeatedly referring to us as friends? To have her _not_ come to us when we're ridiculously and unjustly incarcerated for saving the Human race _again_... And- as your Shep pondered - who was this person that would so callously put our life in peril (after _Saving_ us..) for "Feron!"... of course, Alli Hillis' voice is the clincher, isn't it? They had her put just a _little_ too much in to it when she cried out his name... it was bizarre. "just friends?"... heh.. I did same as Theo - I made her call me back after I'd said "talk to you later, Liara".. too funny. anyway.. I digress all over, don't I? Sorry dude! heh. I'm still immersed, which brings me back to- I think I need to re-read your story after I've disconnected some. I am actually feeling "jealous" which is... crazy. In fact - I started to remark about how crazy it is that this damn game ( I love it.. heh.. but..) the game has actually stirred what feel like real emotions - for a fictional person. When I saw the actress who inspired Liara's phyiscal attributes, I was relieved that she barely resembled her - I don't want to be enamored with some actress ;-) Dodged a bullet. OF course, if she got all made up and painted blue - I'd have to force myself to look away - I wouldn't even want to see it. Sorry man - this is supposed to be a review. I will try again in a week or two. Keep writing, as they say!

Just a great story very well written. I only notice one spelling mistake I believe somewhere in the 3rd or 4th chapter. I have been reading none-stop for well over an hour and please continue. If I may make a suggestion; put them in chronological order? It just gets rather confusing. But nonetheless, a fantastic job! I have sincerely learned more about the first mass-effect game by reading this than anything else. (P.S. can't wait for the next one, especially the love screen for me3)

Usually I tend to prefer FemShep/Liara (and I guiltily admit of having such series of my own), but this is still very enjoyable.

Besides, your Shep almost shares name with my screen name here. Obviously he would be a man of excellent taste and prefer Liara over Ashley. (not the greatest fan of Ash, here)

Keep it up! o/

hope to see some more

nice story :)

I was wondering whatever happened to your Fic? sorry for not reviewing it sooner, but imagine my surprise as i find it again only rated M and see that you had updated 4 new chapters! great work and hope you update soon.

TO BAD THEY PARTED THERE .

to bad for him .

sad for her happy for her .

Cool, I loved the Drama/romance thing and I also enjoy the way you put some interactions between Liara and the other companions, I always thought that they could put some interactions between Liara and the old normandy crew in that part.

Really, your fic is very good, keep posting :D

I thought that you had abandoned this fic, I'm glad to see that I was wrong :D

Nice chapter!

Nice retelling of LOTSB! Please continue! There is definitely not enough M!Shep/Liara around here!

That's great, another M!Shep/Liara fic. Please continue this, I'd love to see your own interpretation of what happens to the two of them after the events of LotSB.

Please keep writing about this pair, there aren't enough (actually it's almost non existent) fics about them.