Reviews for What Could Have Been
Rebecca Hufflepuff chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Hi, it sounds interesting so far, but I just couldn't help pointing out one little mistake, I know you meant(or at least I hope you did :P) that they found out Lily was pregnant with Harry, but what you actually said was:
'Sirius remembered when he had bought it, the day he found out Harry was pregnant.'
Harry is a little boy. He cannot be pregnant. This has to be the funniest typo I've seen in a while.
I'm looking forward to read the next chapter.
fan-freak121 chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Hello! I have read this story repeatedly and I would just like to tell you how much I have enjoyed it. I was wondering if I could finish this story for you? I would tell everybody who reads in the A/N that this story previously was yours; but I would still like to see it finished if you aren't going to finish this. Just press on my name and then press on my email to send me a message either way, thank you.
tkdprincess96 chapter 18 . 1/28/2011
PLEASE UPDATE THIS!
Rori Potter chapter 17 . 11/7/2008
That was touching... Please update soon.
Rori Potter chapter 12 . 11/7/2008
This was great.
Rori Potter chapter 7 . 11/7/2008
This is great.
Rori Potter chapter 5 . 11/6/2008
This is great. please update soon.
malaga chapter 6 . 9/15/2007
Good story, but does the Ginslut really need such a big part? Please tell me Harry won't date her...

You also need a beta, to deal with a few things like:

"And now... with the look he was given as he walked into class, finding himself under the gaze of the cold yellow eyes of Snape."

Snape has black eyes.

"Filch spat out another string of horrible words and sped down the hallway away from Harry. A thump behind Harry meant the others were climbing down. Harry turned to face a Neville grinning ear-to-ear. "That was brilliant! A can't believe you actually pulled it off.""

Peeves, not Filch, and I, not A.

Yeah, just fix a few little things like this, and your story will be great.
asd chapter 4 . 3/5/2007
"Saved a mob of halfwits magical people from a terror they didn’t truly understand. From a man who they refused to confront themselves, someone they were so terrified of that they were afraid to speak his name. What sort of delusions did they have to make them so afraid that even his name was spoken in fear?"

and the biggest of the lot was the weasels, they were not in the original order, perfering to hide away in the hovel they call home, why people keep putting them in the stories is beyond me
you fucked your own story chapter 3 . 3/5/2007
you know this looked like it would be a great story, but you had to go and introduce the weasels, fuck man even at 10 he cant get away from the gutter slut. if they were on the run the last place they would go is near the weasels, muggle loving fools the lot of them, and idiots believe whatever anyone spoonfeads them, they are the mindless sheep that allow the likes of voldiemort to not only exist but thrive.
jedielfsorcerer chapter 18 . 3/2/2007
good story. keep it up.
Iolana chapter 6 . 7/16/2006
Professor Andrew Wiggin? Surely not! Could it be everyone's favorite Wiggin?
japanese-jew chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
. . . I've lost so much respect for you since I saw you misspell SOLE in the disclaimer.
Kirk4ever chapter 18 . 6/9/2005
are you going to continue, coz it's really goo so far and i want to carry on.

just one thing, you didnt really explain about the change of teachers, like DADA and HoM. i meant to review before, but i was hooked, and needed to carry on
SeikoTuNeR chapter 2 . 5/26/2005
To some, having 10-11 year olds kiss each other may be cute, but to me, its.. like.. ew! Meh.
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