Interesting... murdering ron weasley should be. Thing

I really love this story :) plssssssssssssssssssss make more :D

Why did you make Luna out to be so rude? She's a bit eccentric but she always has good manners. She's one of the most nicest people who speaks her mind but she won't go "inspecting the inside of someone's fridge" or their cupboards.

And how did they manage to apparate to La Push? They've never been there before.

Good job. I like the story

Your a fucking douche with no creativity I mean you ruined hermione with a jackass like Jacob black I mean why couldn't you do Sirius he's the same: a dog that has a motorcycle I mean COME ON at least try to come up with something my 2 year old cousin is able to have better grammar and spelling... AND SHE WOULD ATLEAST HAVE RESPECT FOR SUCH A GREAT FEMALE ROLE MODEL SUCH AS HERMIONE GRANGER YOUR A FUCKING PUSSY!

This was a lot of fun. Jacob as pining puppy dog was well done. Hermione was mature and not about to be caught up in imprinting love at first sight. Enjoyed it. Thanks for writing.

Cute

Haha Jacob, you're hopeless

I can't wait for the next chapter coming up love it

Love the ending but would have loved for it to be longer

Lol! That was toooo funny! Loved the little epilogue. Hysterical.

I don't know why you don't like this story. I actually very much liked it. But I have stories like that too where people really like them, and I just kind of don't for no reason.

Hope you've written other things that you liked better.

Tori

This was great! Good job!

-Olivia Rose

LOVED!

Really well done! Not only did you manage to integrate the two worlds in a believable way, you also managed to point out every flaw that Twilight had while also pointing out its strength.