hey when are going to podt your next chapter? your story is really interesting

Awsome story, please continue.

~Rider~

Great beginning to the story! I wonder why Tohru doesn't remember Yuki... I can't wait for your next update!

I like how with only three little sections in three chapters, you've already set the stage for something really convoluted and thorough:

In chapter 1, Tohru sees Yuki for the "first time"

Chp 2, Yuki comments on how she has the hair ribbons

Chp 3, it says "[Momiji] wished he could tell her the truth, but he made a promise . . ."

The reader already has a lot of questions and alludes to what the final situation is. I hope you update, because I want to know why Tohru had to forget Yuki and what happens when they meet again!

First off, I forgot to say in my previous review that I love your username. It's very unique and intrigues me!

I think you portray Tohru's innocence and curiosity very accurately. That scene was very cute and made me smile, but as soon as I got to Yuki's monologue (or so I assume), my heart ached a little. I especially like the line about her wearing those ribbons. Despite the brevity, you managed to pack in a lot of emotion.

Thank you for updating so quickly!

I like what you have up so far and am very curious as to where you will take this. I hope you update soon. I want Tohru and Yuki to meet!