Please update

please continue this story I love it so much.

sorry that this is my first time commenting, but I am posting Jenny is gonna win that bet.

Gibbs's flowers always have meaning and significance- is there meaning behind the number 50 or is it just a crap load of flowers? lol. :)

The ASL thing between Abby and Gibbs totally makes sense now! Is this an aspect unique to your stories or is it also true of the series? It's something I can't recall.

Ok, so like the previous one, I told you I wouldn't comment on every chapter, but I just had to say that when Jenny first found out she was pregnant, my initial thought was "Why couldn't she have conceived right before her rape?" since they seemed to have a pretty... um... consistent (trying really hard to be delicate here lol!) sex life, but it wasn't til chapter 12 that I connected her issues eating to morning sickness. Yay for a 2 chapter advance foresight! :)

I DONT HATE YOU ALIYAH, I TOO AM PRO LIFE, AND I TOO WOULD KEEP THE BABY. IM A HANDICAPPED PERSON, AND MY MOM, CHOSE TO ABORT ME I LOVED THE WAY, YOU WROTE STORY! KUDOS!

Is there tiva involved in this story? Cxxxx

Loved all three stories in this series. You had me so wrapped up in the aftermath of Jenny's kidnapping. Please could you add some more here. At least what the baby is and McGee 's and Abby's wedding. You write so well and really do your research.

Aww. I really loved the scene between Tony and Ziva. I'm sure I've said it before, but I'll say it again. I love Tiva, especially the way that you write it. There's a lot of playful, but also a very clear grasp of what they characters display and need when they are around each other.

And I felt very proud of myself when I knew exactly what moment Tony was talking about in the Bourne movies. Especially since I've never seen any of them in their entirety.

As for Jenny. She handled that very calmly, and I'm glad. It annoys me when Jenny comes across incredibly vain. She strikes me as someone who is very aware of her appearance and knows how to use it to her advantage, but also how to dress in order to be taken seriously. That and the fact that I'm sure she's also a tiny bit happy because of the reason for this particular change. Or, at least will be when she can calm down.

"You ever get the feeling we're looking at Abby in about fifteen years?" I was totally just thinking that! Literally moments before I read the line. Wicked awesomeness.

Now, wait a minute, which bet is this? I'm lost... [

And, as usual/because I have to. I love Rachel.

] Kiko

Sweet and tender. I liked it.

I think my favorite part out of all of it might have been the short moment of Tony and Ziva. I actually am a big fan of Tiva, though I don't read it all that much. But Ziva was the first character I became attached to so I suppose I have a soft spot for her romance. And I love the way you go about doing it.

With Abby and McGee, it's sweet, but I can also understand the little bits of annoyance. I like how none of them really got off easy on that arena. They're all a little edgy because something didn't go just right. The moment of Abby and McGee talking about McGee's family was kind of sad, but I liked it. You hear bits and pieces about just about everyone else's family, except really for those two. And I always kind of got the impression that McGee's childhood wasn't all that wonderful too. Also, I found it incredibly entertaining that Abby spoke of sleeping on the couch as if it were something normal and acceptable. Which, I get that it is, but I seriously never thought I'd hear that.

The baby moved! So wonderfully awesome. Haha. That's so great for Jenny. And then Rachel came in. lol Oh do I love Rachel and her childish antics. And I agree, Rachel is a good sister for Gibbs. He needs someone that's a little crazier to balance out his seriousness. Maybe that's why he and Abby get along so well?

I liked how you put in the little moment of Jenny having trouble with feeling trapped. It was quick, and not something that you could just brush off, but also a good way of illustrating that while things still can occur, they aren't always so horrible.

] Kiko

Love it when are you going to have the next chapter?

Sweet. Though, Jenny is not very nice to Gibbs when it comes to not teasing him. She would have killed him if he did anything of the sort to her at any point, I'm sure. Oh well, they do say payback's a b...

I loved Abby and McGee's moment very much. It was nice that McGee was able to just be vulnerable. He works so hard to hide that vulnerability from everyone. And Abby did very well with the knowledge of just how close she'd come to losing her family.

The Tony/Ziva moment was really sweet. It makes a lot of sense. Even if they aren't going to take their relationship to the next level right now, or even if such things aren't even hinting in their minds, they are partners and such trust is really cool.

I found it interesting that both Abby and Jenny sort of wanted a promise of safety, but Ziva did not. Abby I would expect because, regardless of how much she may understand the job they do, she's still the optimist that sees the hope. And Ziva I also wouldn't expect because she knows the job so well. And Jenny... Well, I didn't expect her to want a "safety promise" at first, because she knows the job just as well as Gibbs and Ziva do. But, when I think about it, I would also expect her to want it because she's so much that kind of person. I don't know if that made ANY sense, but figured I'd try.

] Kiko

This chapter is love. Oh so wonderful.

Oddly enough, I was just thinking about the number of close calls these guys usually have and the fact that they hadn't had any in this story... and then I read this chapter.

I am much loving Abby and Jenny's reactions. It'll sound horrible, but I really do enjoy the moments when they freak out. Simply because, Abby is such a bouncy character, and Jenny is almost always all business. Its that other side to things that don't usually come up. And it's really interesting to see things like that.

Glad that McGee wasn't knocked over in the middle of the squad room. That would have been kind of embarrassing. Though, I think that everyone would have understood, considering it's Abby. And it was cool that his conversation with Abby, while not exactly private, wasn't exactly public either. Always nice to know that others will respect your privacy when needed.

Wow. Way to go Jenny. She figured out what was wrong with Gibbs really quick. And pretty good luck to Gibbs that he wasn't badly injured or hiding a gunshot wound. I have no doubt that Jenny really would kill him for it.

Tony and Ziva's conversation was really cute. Tact isn't one of those things that people often associate with Tony, but if he needs to he can be one of the most serious people on the show. It's cool that he is in this moment. And I can't wait to see how he weedles himself into staying with Ziva. Not that I have any doubts that she'll let him.

] Kiko

Eeeeep! It's so exciting! I am not at all unhappy that this was a Jibbs-less chapter, simply for the fact that it was wonderfully adorable.

So much loving the fact that Tony and Ziva are the best man and maid of honor. It makes so so much sense. And I loved McGee's comment about Abby and Ziva's friendship because it is so spontaneous and started out so badly, but it's also such a good friendship.

Abby going in to tell Jenny was pretty darn adorable. Doesn't the fact that Jenny is married to Gibbs make Jenny Abby's honorary mother or something like that? Just wondering for the sake of wondering.

Bahahahaha! Tony will sic the ninja on McGee? haha He won't need to. If McGee ever does anything McGee will have to be racing Gibbs, Jenny, Ziva, and Abby for first crack at him, and that's not going to be an easy race to win.

Super duper cutesy. I really love Abby's energy. It makes everything a little nicer.

] Kiko