What's this "unknown force" all about?

527262626th re-read

Thanks for the story, I really enjoyed it!

Even a couple years ago when this was written, you were a fantastic writer. Really enjoyed re-reading this!

I’m about to do the same thing as I did in my last review haha , Ruin my sleep schedule

This was a great story. I wish it had a few more chapters in it.

Felt the need to re-read this, was great. May have kept me up two hours too late, but it was 100% worth it haha

Thank you! It is hard to find a GVi fic that doesn't portray Videl as a total *itch. I mean, yes, she wasn't very nice when she first appeared, but she was WAY better than Chichi's level (child abuse and controlling much?)- and I just wanted to thank you for your portrayal of her. And Gohan is one of my faves- so thank you again for sharing!

I really like your story. The way you made them fall for each other was very cute

Uh... I enjoy the fic quite a bit but Vegeta answering questions? Talking Bout Saiyan after living with Bulma for so long? He's not idiot come on!

I mean... No way a renowned scientist is going to greet visitors, that's what secretaries are for.

You write great. It's hard to find fanfiction that's believable, makes sense, easily understood, next to no spelling errors, good punctuation, proper spacing, and other of sorts. Even if this is a short fanfiction I'd say this is one of the better works.

people say hello, I say piccolo!

to be honest with you, I love these kind of moments in a story.

I have read this story so many times, yet it still is just as amazing as it was back then! (This was my first V/G rice sooooooo yes! good job!