That was quite endearing. Thank you for sharing this little storie of what would have made a great sequel to the original movie. Without this story people are just left to wonder, and draw their own conclusions. I very much liked this. I myself always wondered what "happened" after the ending. Since Shakespear didn't write a "happily ever after ending" there was nowhere to go. But your short story let us in on an "imaginative' 10 years later. How sweet that Benvolio named his children after his cousin Romeo and his wife. Then going on to marry "Roseline", Romeo's original love interest. Yes I liked this story.

Really really god, I wish you would write more!

Some grammatical errors are in this. Overall, it was a nice story, but I would like to ask-Wouldn't Rosaline have inherited the Capulet fortune? She is a Capulet after all and if Nurse could inherit then why not have it go straight to Rosaline? Oh well, in the end it goes to Julietta anyway.

This is great :) Nice work! x

Wow, that was great. Honestly, Benvolio is my favorite person ever and you captured him beautifully! And I loved the plot twist of him ending up with Rosaline :) That was cute. Again, great job!

This didn't help at all. But I hope you got an A on the paper, it was good, but not what I was looking for. Thanks anyways.

sry but this is really bad...after 10 years u cant remember every detail...do u remember what u were doing 10 years ago today?

Finally, a Benvolio story:D I've become obsessed with his character over the past week and a half or so...