Reviews for After Life
Orihime-18 chapter 20 . 5/27
I was wrong when when I gave 10/10..this exceed its 11/10 hehe..I loved the wedding everyone is in there they’re precious friends kurusaki family and the fact that Yamamoto here was so nice considerate and kind for giving such a privilege to the best couple ichihime..yehey..the wedding honeymoon and the kids..ichi giving the necklace to their daughter..passing it..it’s a moment there..I really loved the char of ichi here hehe and of course hime too..so this exceed..beyond perfect..thank you so much
Orihime-18 chapter 19 . 5/27
Isshin foreseen everything hehe ...the duffel bag he send to ichi had everything in it..he’s such a cool and best dad and funny ..finally they’re engage (special ring wow)..I’m glad ichi wasn’t an idiot lol..no right time coz that’s the best and right time already..lost chance in the world of living already...one more chap to end..I’m thanking for this story though it’s heartache at first hehe...personally I don’t want to read a sad story and I don’t prefer a sad ending..never..that’s y I read the review first (mostly) in all ichihime stories here I came to lol..if I read its happy ending then I’ll go for it though,.this story is great..its is 10/10..thank u again author
Orihime-18 chapter 12 . 5/27
Delivery (lol renjii)
Two months punishment for those two disturbance lol

Ok finally the long awaited moment the confession..yes banzai..and the first sweet kiss..long live ichihime hehe..I smiled now and laugh
8 more chapters..continue Tom...cant finish reading.,hope they wil marry..(death marry)
Orihime-18 chapter 11 . 5/27
This chapter makes me cry...it pain my heart when u hav to choose..leaving your friends whom loves u dearly too just to be with the person who can really makes u happy..life is really unfair though in (death)..it’s all choices...and I did cry when hime said farewell to tatsuki even to uryu and chad..they’re so good friends but no choice..I’m not crying on the last 10 chat though it’s drama and sad it’s just in here..I don’t cry on ichi’s farewell maybe because he died so no choice but to leave where as on hime’s case she had a choice but of course she can’t live without ichi he’s her life so hav to leave friends..,it moved me so I cry..I feel pain on this part..so me as a reader on all ichihime’s stories this is one of the few stories that I did really cry...nice job author sama..well done
Orihime-18 chapter 10 . 5/27
JUST wait a little for hime ichigo.,.shes coming (to town joke)...their gonna be a heart warming reunion asin..they’re are are really great fried chad uryu tatsuki and I really kisuke and yoruichi for finding ways..of course they are their mentor and they love the two (hime ichi)...hime’s decision to leave after grad was a smart one..their friends hav their own lives and wil go college differently (maybe haha)...they’re fine..I’m beggining to like this part of story coz it’s lighter hehe.,no more heavy drama (sadness)
Orihime-18 chapter 9 . 5/27
Dying inside poor hime..suffer so much..(lots of drama story)
I loved the method/way for hime to unite ichi judt vanidh and not to die (dying is useless coz no memory)...this is absolutely a very well thought way..whaat...read read read..this I just one go..I’ll finish this one now...:)
Orihime-18 chapter 3 . 5/27
Ouch..this is too much sadness..ichi cant even confess..so he loves hime (feelings same).,.too bad..it’s already ending..it’s an end without a start..whaat...it’s over now..ichihime is over here...no more ichihime in the living world coz ichi was gone.,hime wil die I guess and they wil see each other again in soul society.,.thats y after life on the title right?...guessing...read read read...I get upset though coz they really don’t hav chance in the living world..no more love story..waaah
Orihime-18 chapter 2 . 5/27
TOO much grief..all over sadness huhuhu..heartbreaking..(it’s keigos’s fault here)...just continue reading..(there’s a sunshine after the rain in this story).,after this grief mode
Orihime-18 chapter 1 . 5/27
HUHuhu ichi’s dead..*sad*...Read still coz on the message above it says it’s tragic at first but eventually there is happiness..I just hope this is a happy ichihime story though very sad at first chapter.. I’m Craving for a happy ichihime ending always..I don’t like a sad end :( *preference happy ichihime stories always*..but I’ll give a go on this til end since there’s happiness eventually as it was stated above..hoping *smile*
MysticChemyst chapter 10 . 9/10/2019
The proper word would actually be "Envious". :) Jealousy is when you're 'afraid' someone will take away something you have. Envy is when you want something you don't have.
MysticChemyst chapter 8 . 9/10/2019
I really hope this isn't going where I think it's going...

i mean, it would definitely be an emotionally impactful story but...a friend of mine committed suicide about a month ago, and it's surprisingly making this story a lot harder and more emotional for me to read already, and it's going to be even more difficult if Orihime goes of the deep end, as it were.
MysticChemyst chapter 3 . 9/10/2019
Why can't Kisuke just make another freaking stealth gigai?!

*sobs uncontrollably*

anywho...
MysticChemyst chapter 2 . 9/10/2019
Yup, you got me. I teared up.

That being said...I'm extremely shaky on the premise, here. I mean, I 100% get what you're going for and at the same time...it doesn't really make sense to me?

Like, Orihime should easily have been able to heal his body (reverse what had been done) so that his soul could just slip back in.

I just feel like the theory, the thought behind this plot point could have been better explained and reasoned out so that the reader isn't sitting there going, "Really? This makes no sense!". But yeah!

Of course, I've loved every one of your stories that I've read, so I'm very much going to continue this one and I look forward to seeing how it turns out.

(I'm also not sure why I'm writing this, since I know you've become a published author and I don't think you've ever come back to even look at FF, let alone read all the comments.)

Congrats on your book deals! :D 3

-M.C.
Lori Baker chapter 20 . 8/5/2019
WOW! I absolutely loved it. I happen to own the entire series including movies, I also happen to know that according to wiki that eventually he does marry orihime. So I think you did a excellent job.
Lori Baker chapter 14 . 8/5/2019
I love how sweet you made this chapter keep up the good work.
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