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DragonKnight15 chapter 68 . 7/22 First off, happy 100th review! The rest of the duel... well Final Attack Order puts monsters in Attack Position and they cannot be changed. I still don't follow how Toph didn't take any damage either from that attack. The rest of the duel was okay with Toph doing her best to last long in the duel with her cards which was REALLY impressive and still doing some damage doing so plus I enjoy her ultimate Contact Fusion play to beat Lythos. So yea, amazing job. Feels anti-climatic but I still like the duel overall! Amazing chapter... minus that changed. ... I guess Mai makes sense... Sherry would too with the whole "Wind" part of Speed Duels but whatever. |
DragonKnight15 chapter 67 . 6/11 I'm still glad you've return to this story just to see Vixen Mode owning names but now Kasumi needs to master more of this power if she can use it to protect her love ones. For now, she needs to rest... but that's not a given. ... Right... Hades gives away the Titan Cards. You know for the God that's literally the Greek version of the devil, he screws up in many ways. He knows he will lose and worst when Kasumi and her friends get all the Titan Cards... but I guess we'll see how it turns out. Eventually his loyalty will be switched. ANYWAY, Tania was given a chance to duel our heroes and she picks Toph. Neat! The setup for this was also good with the girls finding the large Colosseum and their opponent awaiting for them. Toph steps up eagerly to kick butt. The duel was interesting that you gave Tania more Amazoness support but also the ones from Arc-V, funny thing Yuya fought the duo Amazoness duelists who both liked his duel style. Long story there. Anyway the first turn with Toph was smart with Rockstone Warrior. You could think about giving Toph Ayers Rock Sunrise for more Rock stuff. Anyway... oh... Amazoness Princess... um that card is real actually and has a completely different effect. Look up the new Amazoness stuff Mai got. So Tania summon her Titan card, Lythos, and big-BIG it is! And it's effect is pretty strong more so once Final Attack Order is triggered. Let's hope Toph has a plan or else it's over. It's going to be HARD for Toph but we'll see how she can turn the tide in the duel and win. But we'll see how well she handles it. Next time should be interesting! Also congrats for almost reaching 100 reviews. |
DragonKnight15 chapter 66 . 5/28 FIRST OFF BETTER... good! Deidara showing off his majestic art with AN EXPLOSION! And Kasumi also freaking out perfectly for the spider part. Deidara should have been pissed like "YOU DARE HATE MY ART! YOU'LL PAY FOR THAT GIRL HMM!". I really like Deidara, whoever he's paired with Sasori or Tobi... Oh Tobi... anyway, Deidara was great... died with an explosion. Will never be forgotten. Anyway Kasumi is still struggling with Aang on her side and Sasori is rarely trying since his opponents aren't impressive that and he can't kill Naruto or else Pain will... well, he'll be mad. The battle isn't going on our heroes way but Kasumi has one trick and decides to try it out, not going to risk losing. Naruto and the others do their best with the distraction as she performs her new technique with Takara and Snowflake only for it to miss... BUT instead she creates a new power taking the form of her first Vixen Mode appearance. I wanted to add since Kasumi became part Vixen, her attitude should think of herself as sexy and have a sense of confidence. Anyway, Kasumi kicks ass. Her new form is much more than a fusion, nailing Deidara and Sasori with ease. Even if he went all out, Sasori knew his odds were bad. Pain... Obito, those two will likely be one of the few to try to fight Kasumi in that form, Kisame too. Boy am I curious how Kasumi will revert back... limited time I guess or she can just shut it down by focusing hard enough. But I love the chapter a lot! Especially when the others arrive to see her new form. I wanted but forgot to mention that you should put a link to Vixen Mode on this chapter to hype it. ANYWAY... next Titan card I'd imagine. JUST... a good chapter! I love it! |
DragonKnight15 chapter 65 . 5/13 Welcome back doing Kasumi Redwall! I don't blame Kasumi. Sasuke's rage and desire for her has crossed more than one line. It makes perfect sense and glad Kakashi comforts her that they will defeat him. HAHAHA... that banter between Deidara and Sasori was perfect. I love that scene of them discussing the plan and it's good! I love it! Well our heroes were ready for the ambushed from Azula and Sasuke's group, easily handling them until the explosion happen and Kasumi is right, this was the work of someone else and I LOVED Kasumi overreacting to what Naruto said that it could be someone going after her but EVERYONE basically is going after Kasumi and this was bad for her... and here comes the duo of art. HAHAHA... Deidara versus Sokka is like... BAD... because Deidara will kick his butt especially this version of Sokka. Anyway, Kasumi has to deal with these guys with just Aang, Naruto and Sokka... oh boy... Basically Deidara morphs his clay into things like birds or spiders or landmind spiders or stuff that he can throw at his enemies and they move and use them to explode on better impact than just throw clay to explode them. That's Deidara style even when he fought Itachi and lost badly. You can fix that for the next chapter. Overall, AMAZING RETURN and chapter! Great job Redwall! |
DragonKnight15 chapter 64 . 4/17/2019 So the duel between Naruto and Sasuke continues and it wasn't bad that Naruto got a Fusion with his two Sphinx monsters and it's really strong... but then Sasuke had Dreadroot and that monster is unbelievable strong forcing Naruto to regroup. He does his best going around Dreadroot's massive power but Sasuke only proves that nothing can stop it coming back... until Naruto performs a crazy Xyz and so Naruto beat Sasuke and the souls of those Sasuke defeated were return back... but now the Akatsuki are back... lovely... because the point of the three years were that they were off catching the other Tailed Beasts' Jinchurikis first before Naruto being the most difficult due to the strain of separating him from the Nine-Tails during that time. So we can assume they're really going after Kasumi. Anyway we'll see for next time. Good chapter though. |
DragonKnight15 chapter 63 . 3/13/2019 Okay, time for the clash between rivals greatly. Naruto did well to trick Sasuke that he's Kasumi but Sasuke should have suspected something the moment he saw Des Koala then Nimble. Doesn't matter, Naruto does his best even summoning a new sexy vixen on his side on the field... and also best Sakura never learns the words he said about half-brain girls knowing better to love an emo. Kasumi's training completed but it's interesting you didn't have her learn of her new power yet which maybe Jiraiya did when he appeared. Anyway, Kasumi learned the truth from Meowth and chases after Naruto who she caught up still in the middle of the evenly-ish duel though Sasuke is leading with Dystopia and doing a good job with it. Can Naruto turn the duel around, maybe... maybe. Next chapter will be something else with Wicked Dreadrout about to summon. |
DragonKnight15 chapter 62 . 2/20/2019 Haku dueled well against Sasuke but he proven that even his Blue-Eyes Ice Dragon is no match against Dystopia but Haku just managed to prove him wrong... ONLY for Sasuke to surprise him using his trap and later bring out Dark Rebellion and hurt Haku hard. Elsewhere Snowflake grows rapidly and now she and Kasumi are in sync, allowing the birth of a new Fang-Over-Fang. That just leaves one more Jutsu and this one Kasumi will truly be a different person. Back to the duel... Haku tried his best with the strength of his Ice Dragon but Sasuke just proved that's meaningless to the likes of Requiem Dragon, destroying him. But now Naruto transformed as Kasumi appears to see Haku lose his soul and now must do his part to beat his friend and stop his madness. And yes, next time should be good because Naruto is either going to get a draw or last long enough for Kasumi to arrive and interrupt the duel. Either way, it's going to be interesting. |
DragonKnight15 chapter 61 . 1/29/2019 Neat, new chapter! Oh Aang... hmm... Redwall, you think Sasuke could beat Aang in a duel? Because I'm pretty sure Sasuke beats him with his current deck. Anyway Aang informs the others who manage to escape the traps that were attacked and now they need a way to not let Kasumi know what's happening. Haku offers to stall for time but in case he fails, Lance has a backup plan and it's a clever one... AND ALSO the discussion of power levels in dueling skills. Just because Naruto can't beat Hanabi or Lance doesn't mean he can't beat Sasuke... dueling is about chance in getting the right cards, the strategy and combos... and the believe in yourself and your cards to draw the miracle card to win the duel. Heart of the f**king cards, only non duelists wouldn't get that; Haku and Lance do. So give him some faith; Naruto might surprise everyone. Elsewhere Kasumi's training continues with Aang needed Naruto for the plan and of course Kasumi sees through it but didn't learn what it was, forcing her to let Naruto leave with Aang. From there with the others, they explain the situation to Naruto who became both stun and angry Sasuke is doing this and hurting his friends again. He accepts to Lance's plan and stall for time but I'm pretty sure in the back of his head, with Sakura's nagging on "Please bring him home", Naruto will try to beat Sasuke and take him back... pff, that's going to end ugly but I see that as him doing something careless. At least no one can lie that Naruto can do the Transformation Jutsu the best among the group and play the part long enough to do stuff. Anyway, Haku congrats Sasuke and EASILY dismantles Azula and her group EASILY, without debating. I like the banter between Haku and Sasuke, just like old times. Well anyone can have Clear Mind if you master it to perform the Accel Synchro. Not just Yusei, Bruno was the first to master it technically... then Z-ONE but that's a different topic. I'm sure Kasumi will master it once she's older to do Speed Duels (also if you prefer, you can make a new rule that you can use the regular Spells than Speed Spells and keep the Speed World 2's counters for the effects, maybe even add some that Duel Links put in. Just saying, you can do a lot. I'll do the same for DKR honestly. Anyway, Haku accepts Sasuke's challenge the two commence the duel... for next time. GOOD, good cliffhanger. It's actually a good idea you did it like that. Well done Redwall. Next time... Haku might lose, Sasuke's deck right now is in a different level and would be the perfect revenge after all Haku beaten Sasuke both canon and in Kasumi's story. Oh Tundra Fang Over Fang, nice name! Sure, no worries. Then tomorrow you mind testing Mieko and Jack's decks in Nexus or Dueling Book? Let me know in the reply. And I knew that, but thanks for the reminder. |
DragonKnight15 chapter 60 . 1/15/2019 Oh this chapter had stuff I did like indeed. The first part with that cliffhanger-ish part of the duel was great with Toph trying to fight back but Sasuke summons Dystopia and is about to beat Toph, he doesn't... yet. Kasumi's training with her Vulpixes continue and have slightly improved but not by much even when Takara helps Snowflake by adapting to her movement. Kakashi was best used for this being the only one to see that Snowflake's speed is dropping being that she's still very young and just training to be a ninja pet. That's not easy. Pakkun, Google Search for Kakashi's dog name. Anyway good thinking to have him teach Snowflake how to fight. Elsewhere Haku and Lance are ambushed by Zuko, working with Sasuke to restore his status as prince, as a distraction to let Sasuke duel. Speaking of, Toph survives and brings out her Gem-Knight Paladin to fight back hard but even Sasuke uses the same Defense Draw to evade defeat. Summoned Skull, just to correct you. You spelled it right before. So here comes Sasuke with his ultimate move and won- Wait, wait a minute... Toph still has Swords of Revealing Light. Sasuke couldn't attack with Archfiend Black Skull even if he won the duel. He couldn't have won. You need to fix that Redwall, like really fix it. So until you fix the Swords of Revealing Light part, Sasuke wins and takes Toph's soul and left Aang alone with the lifeless body of his friend. Sasuke is on a roll and there might be no stop. Good chapter... minus that part you need to fix badly. Next part should be Sasuke using the full extend of the Summoned Skulls, just saying, it's Haku after all. |
DragonKnight15 chapter 59 . 1/1/2019 Alright... Sasuke's path of revenge continues! So Team Rocket found Hanabi in her condition, scared she must be dead but not really... kinda is. It's good they're the good guys now. So they took Hanabi's back to the others and obviously they knew this is a Shadow Game's doing that Hanabi lost her soul. Now they need to find who took it... but it won't be easy who it really is. Meanwhile Kasumi trains her Vulpixes to fight together, and hehe, yea Naruto is the perfect test dummy. But of course Snowflake is struggling since she's never been trained before no less as a ninja pet but she's showing she's no pushover if she can almost freeze the real Naruto by mistake. Of course Kasumi still needs more training too. Boy did I missed Sasuke... like... "Kill Itachi, restore clan, beat losers" sense of mind and Azula both pleased with these new results for her endgame but pissed that a kid is doing it better than herself. I'd imagine if the two fought, we both know Part 1 Sasuke wins without trying. He's that strong over Azula even with Lightning Bending. Aang isn't wrong Kasumi would not think and try to save Hanabi no matter what. Also it was unlucky he and Toph confronted Sasuke... Sasuke would have like use wire ninja tools to tied up Aang better than others. I was thinking that. Anyway Toph's pride gets to her and challenges the Uchiha to a duel to save Hanabi's soul... boy will that cost her. The first part of the duel was great with Sasuke showing off he's no ordinary foe and easily dismantle most of Toph's combos, though she still prove she's no pushover. Then comes Samurai Destroyer *cough* Susanoo right? *COUGH* And he still has Summoned Skull ready to show real terror. Sasuke ask Zuko for a favor and in return he can be a prince again. I can see that working. The chapter was great, looking forward to the next part! |
DragonKnight15 chapter 58 . 12/18/2018 Okay, Sasuke is back and he's here with vengeance! I mean Kasumi is afraid to fight the Uchiha Avenger even though she can summon Zeus... but I'd imagine Sasuke knows already that won't work a second time. Maybe Hades gave him something or Orochimaru taught Sasuke a Jutsu to be immune to Zeus' attack... HMM... that can work. Makes it that much more for Kasumi to fight Sasuke without Zeus. Interesting. Anyway, Kasumi is creating a new Jutsu to be ready for Sasuke and Kakashi is helping her out naturally. Snowflake will take time to learn how to fight like a ninja pet but I'm sure she can do it. I'm surprise Sasuke hasn't been to Azula "GIVE ME AN ARMY so I can kill Itachi." She might... if he brings him Kasumi and Aang alive or dead. And yes... clowns... dangerous clowns but clowns. Besides... compare to the two, Sasuke is more of a threat than Azula. All she wants is to be a princess and knows she's strong, Sasuke sees his flaws and seeks greater strength for a greater goal. Like right now he knows Kasumi is a threat to not be taken likely. And also he knows how Kakashi thinks too... after all, he learned from him. OH PFF, the Millennium Eye. That's ironic. I'm surprise Sasuke, an Uchiha who uses eye powers, would get that Millennium Item. Neat. Anyway his plan is simple but effective, like a real Uchiha would use to lure their targets EXACTLY where they can be. Anyway Sasuke commences his attack and towards Hanabi... and yea, Kasumi's best friend. I actually agree with that. Anyway with Naruto determined to bring his friend in the darkness back, Haku has to make sure he doesn't do anything stupid while Hanabi engages the Uchiha and the two commence their duel. The TCG name for Decider Guy is Decider just so you can remember. Also Dystopia has 2800 ATK, not 2600. The duel was interesting with Hanabi having a strong start and combo but Sasuke beats down all that... though that Kuriboh drop was a little... like it makes sense but it doesn't. Like you could have it that the Sword of Deep Secrets negates effects during the Damage Step, making Kuriboh REALLY and UTTERLY useless. I can see that so yea. So Hanabi loses and the Millennium Eye takes her soul. Hmm... Summoned Skull... another ironic twist with later in Shuppiden with Sasuke's Susanoo. Hehe, it's fitting. The chapter was really good! Nice job Redwall! I wish we experiment with Sasuke's Deck. Next time? Also looking forward how Toph will handle Sasuke or lose oh ho. |
DragonKnight15 chapter 57 . 12/5/2018 Alright, new chapter! The duel between Jessie and James continues as James tries to strike back and instead Jessie summons not just Geh but Hyper Sonic Blaster. Geh's quick effect makes its ATK become the original ATK of the highest original ATK monster on the field, so either. But everything else about it was fine. The rest of the duel was great with James stalling hard while Jessie further increases her numbers even after Geh was destroyed with Ultimate Axon and Assault Mode Hyper Sonic. However James still play his cards well until he got the right combo to not just beat Hyper Sonic but use his trap to inflict the rest of the damage to Jessie, winning the duel. He needed the win, just saying. And hehe fun scene with Kasumi's partners attacking Naruto for opening his mouth. Idiot. But when he's not, he worries about his best friend who's in the darkness and Haku won't let him get killed for that. It's not bad of a serious scene. Okay so Sasuke vs Hanabi. Should be interesting. Looking forward to it! I liked the chapter, did well. |
DragonKnight15 chapter 56 . 10/30/2018 The chapter in Alerts REFUSES to show regularly so I had to use Yahoo to see it. Sorry it took long Redwall... terrible day. Well... Yellow or Red (both) suit Naruto, just saying. And I agree, homework is dumb. So yes, I agree Kasumi is a good influence for Team Rocket since... ever. So it's only fair that Jessie and James duel for fun, right? Right! Lance agrees with Kasumi and hmm... teacher hmm. Hmm... interesting, pitting them differently... well that's what I got from the argument Jessie and James had and Meowth explains it violently of course that's not what he meant so Kasumi could explain it and did... and they're idiots not getting the fact they're battling each other friendly, not traitors. Geez. You know who has a briefcase of cards... Seto Kaiba. Yea. Anyway, the two built their decks and assemble them to duel each other. Also nice on the Coin Toss, it is their first duel... and Sokka and Naruto opening their idiot mouths about females shouldn't win a duel. Idiots. The start of the duel is rather interesting with how we did our duels with both their decks. Like I said, James and Jessie's decks are similar in sense of defensive cards but how they set them is a different story. Also happy you use that line between Jessie not aware of Naga's other effect. And even though Jessie too the first damage but turn her play around, James shock her by summoning something I wish or somewhat similar was real... Aki... she should have gotten an evolved Black Rose. SIGH. So Part 2... makes sense actually. Looking forward to it and how Jessie has to deal with James' Fusion Monster. ...SIGH... I wish Black Rose Dragon got an evolution OR THIS FANMADE FUSION MONSTER. Damn it. |
DragonKnight15 chapter 55 . 10/16/2018 Okay... this chapter. Duel Puzzles are neat... Naruto wouldn't solve them, just saying. So this is funny... Kasumi forgot that she was captured by Hades and how he brought Sasuke back due to the whole Marik the Third and stuck in the Pokemon world. That was very clever from you Redwall and I liked that a lot! People forget so not a problem. I'll say this... off topic, Sasuke has more potential than Azula. Just Sharingan and Cursed Mark makes him no push over and later on his life he'll become even stronger. So Kasumi has to be careful more than ever as she and her group try to capture Azula though it won't be easy. OH... they just met?! Who has a bigger ego? The Fire Nation Princess or the Uchiha Avenger? Well this was very fun. I thought this would be an easy captured for Kasumi to get Azula but now Sasuke makes things DIFFICULT. Ambushed time and OOOH... Sasuke F**KING a lot of people. Katara got no counter for him, Sokka has NOTHING on him, and Sasuke is going easy on Naruto without the Sharingan. While they fight, Kasumi and the others try to fight Azula and her allies though still struggling badly. Yea Tai Lee's "Paralyzing strikes" are similar to the Gentle Fists which makes Kasumi the PERFECT counter to her abilities and prevents her from getting stunned. Good. GOOD. Though... hahaha... Kasumi sort of impaling Azula was perfect. In a sense, Azula is forced to retreat now that Kakashi has gotten rid of the Sound Ninja and Fire Nation soldiers. Ha, Sokka should ask Naruto yelling about Sasuke "YOU TWO WERE FRIENDS?!" And Naruto explains "It's complicated". Good chapter, I liked it more than I thought. Nice job Redwall! Alright... next time... neat. Good luck with that next time Redwall with the duel between friends. James' deck will be rather... broken. We'll see. |
DragonKnight15 chapter 54 . 10/3/2018 Okay, this chapter. Good thing you had Kasumi use her Shadow Clones to let her parents know she's okay... and hehe, Naruto sure loves his ramen and for once Team Rocket will get food then starve to death. One of them is busted, the other aka Zuko's love interest, uses... pff... fans? I don't remember. Yea, the one that paralyzes that is actually a unique style of anti-Bending later in the Legend of Korra. Honestly, Sharingan users are the only ones who could beat her. Anywho, ghosts... yea, Naruto is afraid of ghosts. Future Hokage everyone, hehe. So Kasumi's group heads into this forest to ambushed Azula and recapture her but they have to go through a haunted forest first and boy is Naruto not a fan of that. Aang is a fan of all ghosts, or Jaden... or someone who's not scared of it. Kasumi's team heads out and well... Well Kasumi, if this isn't the Pokemon world, how did Takara appear here? So don't assume there's no Pokemon in your world either hehe. So Naruto, you went in the creepy nightmare place known as the Forest of Death... DEATH, this haunted forest shouldn't be a challenge at all. Oh Zuko is doing stuff... so I never asked... you changed him and Iroh's exile of the Fire Nation is different hmm? Seems very unlikely that it's Zuko being the... ghostly werewolf but I guess... it's dumb for sure but fine. So 1 to 10 ghostly werewolves surrounding Naruto and Sokka. The two like Scooby and Shaggie run for their lives while Team Rocket's trap hole worked like always, now used for good. SO the fishermen was Zuko... ok. This was... unique. It was an interesting chapter and not bad. Did amazingly well with Naruto scary outbursts. Technically Sasuke IS alive but they don't know that yet. Overall, good chapter. Yea I have a good feeling who it is... should be interesting. |