Awww. I kinda want her to stay angry at him, but the feels...

I so needed that... You go, Bella!

Oh Edward, you foolish, foolish man-child.

I'm glad she got pissed. She deserves to be!

Poor Bella. I hope she doesn't go easy on Edward, though. What he did was arrogant and assholey! The fact that NM Bella just forgave him as though nothing had happened made me want to slap some serious sense into her.
Another well-written chapter.

This story was recommended to me as an underrated gem. It fits the description. So well written. I am not a fan of NM so I'm always on the lookout for an alternate ending. Great start.

Really liked this story

Loved your story! Thank you for sharing it!

This was nice. Thanks for the read.

Super upset that Jake was killed. But I love that he's still part of the story. This is a really good read. Thank you.

This was really great. Thank you.

This gotta be one of the best post-NM stories I have read. Love that it has very much angst and that Bella did not easily forgive as she originally did. This was more between Edward and Bella instead of draging the entire family into it. The only thing that was missing was an epilogue, but sometimes just leaving the story as it is is better.

Thank you for sharing this lovely story with us. Hope that you will continue writing.

Lots of love,
Messy Bronze Hair

Your depth as a reader shows. Love the literary interweaving.

I am geeking out on the beautiful interplay of lyrics and plot hereelegantly done.

Love the emotional plausibility here. Really enjoying getting into Bella's headspace.