P0i don't really get why we needed all that repeated from Draco's perspective. You repeat things several times such as the hallway scene was probably there 4 times (maybe only 3) but 2 more than necessary at least. You can just say "and person told them what happened" and proceed. I guess ch 4 is supposed to bring it back to the beginning but the beginning isn't clear that it's Draco. It's sounds like it's the narrator or author.
It wasn't until almost the end of the last chapter that I realized Orion John are Sirius and Remus' names.
Oh, I just remembered.
It seemed like what Draco said in the hall made Hermione question her confictions but then Ron reaffirmed them. Idk why if Ron was just going along with it to get with Hermione then he should have jumped on her shaky belief to sway her to the wizarding perspective. Then Asian you nicely included how Ron finds muggle beliefs easier.
Thank you for writing.

It wrenches my heart that Harry felt like a freak. Poor thing especially because of the misunderstanding with Sirius' reaction. I think Lillian Margaret would have flowed better.

Now I want to know how Harry guilt tripped him! XD

im not homophobic but poor hermonie and Ron and especially Ron that just cruel i dont care if he insulted harry and charlie but still no need to disown him his parents are cruel and he didn't even touch Lilly so i feel very sorry for Ron and hermoine i myself am not gay or dont like gays when i was in year 4 a boy came out as transgender and everyone disowned him as a friend even one kid he knew since he was a baby and i was the only one who accepted him for him and i was only 8 at the time my mum asked me what transgender mean and i replied its where a boy/girl feels like they were stuck in a boy/girl body my mum was shocked that i said that and when i was doing a project to stop homophobic bullying i got a computer ban for a month even after another teacher explained that i was trying to stop bullying and my friends tried to stick up for me im still angry about it now i was in year 7 now 10 years later im still angry and also i got pregnant at just 13 and my mum wasn't angry when i said i couldn't have an abortion she was understanding and was happy for me to keep the baby and was even happy when i had my son i named him after harry potter harry smith and his twin Lilly smith i think harry should of told someone at least his family about the pregnancy but also great fan fiction read it all greatest harry potter pregnant fanfic ever :)

This was actually I really great story!
I think I might ship Harry and Charlie now too, so...

Wouldn't mind hearing another side of the story thing... Okay really want to hear what happens with Sirius and Remus and their kids. (Or kids? Maybe? ...okay...)

Would really love another chapter and liked the story!

This is an awesome fic! Would you ever consider do one going thought Sirius pregnancy? I think it would be interesting and this story could be added in when it works

Aw hope Draco and Sev get their much wanted baby. Love it, but wish it was longer

Thanks!

That was good I enjoy it.

Que lindo fic tomado desde distintos puntos de vista

Thank you !

percy betrays. His family and work for the enemy. They forgive him.

Ron expresses homophobia. They disown him without a second though.

Brilliant writing, so funny.

Adorei continua mais bjs

Amazing