Oh, I love how you wrote Yosho in this! He was so sweet and understanding as he gave his daughter and Genki love advice. I can totally see him playing matchmaker. I really liked the banter at the beginning between Yosho and Holly. After them being apart for so long I really liked how they still confided in each other and how Holly was very open with him. Suezo was very receptive, too, which I was relieved about! Even though he's overprotective at least he knew his boundry. I felt so bad for Genki when he was unsure about the topic of sex. Luckily things were cleared up, though again we have Yosho to thank. What an awesome father. . The sex scene was really well written! I loved it when Genki was having trouble unclasping the bra. He's so damn cute. And the jewelry they bought was amazing. This was a great story! So much romance, drama, and even family interactions. Again, great work on this! _