| Reviews for The Promise |
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Shadowcat8511 chapter 57 . 2/4 I’m shipping for a Maya and Byakuya story lol. I remember reading this once before, and because it was so well written I had to read it again. I absolutely love your story planning, and the overall passion you put into it. I’m in love with Maya’s character development even if she is only a supporting character, but all the same she had potential to have her own story. Great job, and I look forward to seeing more of your stories.️ |
lisaflowers chapter 46 . 5/22/2016 Seriously though like you need to write an Urahara/OC STAT |
lisaflowers chapter 45 . 5/22/2016 ITS TRUE WHY CANT THERE BE NAKED URAHARA? |
alicia.jen.havens chapter 57 . 1/28/2016 The ending felt a tiny bit rushed but I still love it. Great work. |
alicia.jen.havens chapter 54 . 1/28/2016 Loved Yama-jii! I could totally see him doing this with his "boys" threatening revolt or running away. Story is so amazing. Most OC characters are bland and uninteresting but yours are not. Keep up the terrific work. |
Daughter of Gloriana chapter 57 . 3/22/2013 *squealing fangirlishly* Cute. All of the cuteses. I love this story. :3 |
AkariSakumi chapter 1 . 2/23/2013 Heheh, this is really fun so far. I have to admit, I'm having trouble seeing a crazy Ryo. She seemed so serious in that one episode in the beginn |
NaoyukiKuchiki chapter 1 . 1/6/2013 got a question. uki fan? |
Lord Woman chapter 57 . 1/19/2012 Oh, this is FABULOUS! I wasn't so sure about it, at first... but then I read the next chapter... and the next chapter... and the next, and the next! I couldn't stop! VERY well done! I ABSOLUTELY love this! |
Fullmetal11791 chapter 4 . 1/13/2012 Interesting story so far, even if I think jushiro...or many straight men for that matter, would say "of course you can, silly". Especially when he had been dreamin of her in his sleep. Just a bit ... Off. Other than him being relatively out of character, I wanted to point out that croissants are French, and are not part of a Western breakfast, as the term is known. Obviously not a big deal, but it's something to know. Other than that, I like where it's going and il def keep reading |
lisaflowers chapter 57 . 1/7/2012 AHH I LOVED it! :) xxx |
Mr Gr33d chapter 57 . 8/11/2011 Since there is so little Jushiro stories, this fic was a god send.A very entertaining story which brought me lots of laughs and a few heart tugging moments. Most importantly the romance felt real which is a testament to your skill as a writer since it is an original pairing. You have done a great job of bringing Ryo to life despite having little to go on from the source material. Your English skills were top notch making the story easy to read and professional looking. I also really enjoyed your funny disclaimers. All in all a great fic, the only issue now is that every time Ryo appears in the anime a feel cheated by her lack of screen time. Thank you for your hard work, Right Realist |
kreason chapter 56 . 7/26/2011 hey my names kreason pillay and i just want to say i LOVE YOU ,I LOVE YOU ,I LOVE YOU . Did i say how much i LOVE you . I share the same addiction to bleach you do . My mom tells me to get a life but beach is more then a cartoon to me, it is my life . I have this emotional connection to it . I also believe that beach should be made completely into hentai , if you know what i mean (wink wink) .thanks for reading this, if you do .would like to hear from you, my email address is : hope to hear from you soon ! Oh! one more thing i live in south africa . So just know you have someone who would love to talk to you . Before i leave did i tell you how much i love you , if i did then here another one I LOVE YOOOOUUUUU ! |
Rochelle13 chapter 57 . 6/5/2011 Great story I absolutely loved it. I couldn't stop reading it and I can't wait for your next story _ |
Garnet chapter 41 . 6/2/2011 OMG! 3 I have been non-stop reading this fic for THREE FRIGGIN DAYS! You have got me obsessed with these two, and it's irking me! GAH! I love the way you write! I really do! You are one of the few writers on FF that has gotten me hooked so easily! :) Keep it UP! (BTW, I'll attempt to help you in your conquest to get Kubo-sama to sign Bleach over to you. You just have to share Kazeshini and Byakuya with me~ 3 |