Sad. You didn't continue this again. This is masterpiece.

The idea is certainly interesting, but the execution could be better.

Grammatical errors are kinda frequent, and in many cases, the phrasing of words could be better. Characters seem OOC most of the time, some ideas or events seem to be poorly thought out, and inconsistencies can be found here and there. Pacing is a little too fast, both for the overall story and the progression of certain events. For example, Natsume seemed to grow really close to Sakura a little too quickly, given that he likes her just about as much as he likes Mikan (except obviously not romantically) in even less time than he’s known Mikan.

The final issue I have is the overuse of Japanese words. Of course, since both series being used in this crossover story are anime/manga, a small amount is inevitable. But when you use way more than is necessary, it starts getting cringey. Too much can even get confusing, as not every reader knows all of the words you’re using, as basic as most of them are. I actually got confused when you used the Japanese names of the different ability groups, since I’m too used to the English translations. The only reason I understood was because I knew what the events/characters of each class are so I could figure it out from the context. You should generally limit the use to honorifics, titles, and names— basically what an English Dub would typically say for the most part.

Please update soon

it's a sad sight that this story seems to be discontinued, I hope that one day this story will be continued.

I really hope you continue this story, it's really enjoyable :)

More! Please!

I wonder when will you up the next chpt?

That ending with the book is a reference to the Fairy Tail episode! If it isn't then you have one of the best imaginations in the world! I absolutely loved replaying that scene in my head, but instead with Kero and Sakura. Wow, this chapter is great!

good work

Can you please make another fanfiction of Gakuen Alice and Card Captor Sakura Crossover
And make the pairings
Sakura X Natsume
Pretty PLEASE I beg you

I'm so happy you updated :3 This is one of my fav fanfic xD

This is a very good fanfiction I already read it many times. And the pairings are great and Natsume and Syaoran are funny together.

It was truly beautiful but I want fort it to be longer
And sorry for my bad English cause I'm a Filipino.

Hallo! I loved this chapter again! Hoping to see ur next chapter soon heheh. I have been coming back to this website just to check whether u have updated ur story:p

Sakura shouldnt lose the RPG seriously she could have use float card

I hope you wont do anymore Syoaran and Sakura it so commen now on the fanfictions there already many pair with Sakura and Li im tired of reading Sakura and Li I want something more interesting.
I can see that Natsume will take a move on Sakura
If the ending is Syoaran and Li and Mikan and Sakura I will certainly will un fav this and not read it again.
please make it
Mikan and Syoaran
Sakura and Natsume