I like what you did with this story (and the previous one). It just does feel like a continuation of what I enjoyed so much about FMA. And, I also like how you continued the theme of naming military personnel after aircraft. :D I know the manga-ka did that and I fully appreciate you continuing it.

This is 6 years overdue, but I believe it's never tooate to tell you how much I love your writing and your stories! Reading this makes me want to be a better writer! Thank you for this jewel, and for your headcanons

I had fun reading it! Many kisses!

Ya know? Major Armstrong being Major Armstrong is probably enough to creepy/terrify most prisoners into revealing their secrets. Seriously, who wouldn't be terrified of a big man, whose an alchemist, with seriously weird sparkles swirling about who also has a weird habit of busting his clothes? Not mentioning how many weird things he attributes to the Armstrong family name.

You know? It really is impressive how quickly Havoc managed to rein in his own fear and take charge of the situation. Definitely shows how much faith/trusts he has that they will find Riza, and that things will return to normal.

A true brilliancy...man,this fic was brilliant... Grum is always having an ace in the sleeve ,freaking old fox ...and all the story...WAS AMAZING OMG I CANT FUNCTION FUCKN FORMIDABLE...God,I forgot this is not even canon...SPLENDID !

YES Marcoh,you are absolutely right ,omg aassdfghj

Riza being badass,fuck yeah!

Armstrong's appearance is damn,someone burn Sikorsky,already...

thank God for Douglas

this is the most SADDEST thing I've ever read...really...and the memories ...my heart is breaking...I love Winry's friendship with Roy,it's amazing

that flashback,ahhh

Damn,this is creepy

oh god,someone find his wife,goddammit !

Mom hawk is the best mom,for sure