Aw that was so sweet. I positively loled when Lotor wondered whether her slap affected his mental capacity. Hilarious! XD!

I love this. This piece in particular actually inspired me to start writing, myself. I have always loved these two as a couple, and one of the things I love specifically about this piece is how in-character it is. It fits into the timeline as something that could have actually happened. For Lotor, you absolutely captured his struggle to maintain control despite the fire she sets off inside him, both emotionally and physically. For Allura, I loved that you nailed her internal struggle as she wars with her own feelings and what she should or shouldn't do - as well as her priceless innocence. Very well done. Thank you.

Awww~ /

It's Julie :-) I never knew you wrote this! How cute is this! Love it :-) You could always do a second part to this one for a nice fluffy happy piece :-)

Michelle ... one of the things I LOVE about your writing is that you make poor Lotor work and - yes - slave for Allura's affections, which is always done is a beautifully written believable way.

Very nicely done. I have missed reading your writing very much! *HUGS*

~Harmony~

I have to admit, watching Voltron, I was rooting for Lotor and Allura. Keith's nice and all but you gotta love a bad boy who could reform.

Again, your writing is intoxicating! Always looking forward to more from you :)

As usual Michelle, you write beautifully.

You know I'm not an l/a fan but this story is quite cute. I loved the title and well...once in a while, its nice to see another side of my handsome evil prince! Great job!

I do feel fluffed! Excellent little tease! Great job Michelle!

That was sweet and funny as h ll. Great job.