| Reviews for The Sheltering Sky |
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   SnowshoeBombay chapter 9 . 4/3/2017 Awww, that was a cute one. I like that Edward wasn't forgiven immediately but that forgiveness also came at a speed that wasn't a snail's. In any case, I've enjoyed this story. |
| jk chapter 6 . 3/12/2017 why write bella like shes a little girl? She has nightmares that Edward will what? break up with her? how fucking lame is that shit. |
| jk chapter 5 . 3/12/2017 wow, bella is seriously wishy washy isn't she? LEAVE...no don't go...go..no...come back. Its kinda fucking pathetic ...I mean at the end of chapter 5 she tells him to go and the next fucking second...SECOND she tells him not to. I kinda hate bella in this moment |
| jk chapter 4 . 3/11/2017 the things alice sees...and when she sees them is very convienant to the story...makes you wonder why alice didn't see Edward so weak and didn't go to him and force him to feed...but then you wouldn't really have had a story huh...then they wouldn't have been at the cabin together...it just reads wrong though...and I kinda HATE alice, meddling little whore. |
| jk chapter 3 . 3/11/2017 do people talk like that to one another? just their naked limbs in the last of the winter wind? LOL yaaaa I cant really see bella saying that. and the whole addiction to pain meds? yaaaa ok...make her seem weak much? she doesn't need any help with that, shes already pathetic. |
| harkie5 chapter 9 . 11/23/2016 Great story! |
| jk chapter 5 . 8/6/2016 why make bella a "real girl" only to have her turn into a pathetic whiny ex in the next breath? just go...wait don't go.. I think you should leave, NOW...please don't go jesus I'm starting to REALLY no like your bella |
| jk chapter 4 . 8/6/2016 I found it funny that they were still in that cabin for DAYS when Edward was at full strength that whole time...and bellas arm was broken...sooooo Edward let her suffer for days..all for the sake of the story? you kinda...compromised your main character...that was stupid. |
| jk chapter 1 . 8/5/2016 Edward took boots off a dead homeless man and he said the jacket was THE SAME (so I assume he got that off a dead homeless guy too) but if he presses his face to it he imagines that he can still smell "HER"? ummm... I'm guessing he means bella..but really that doesn't make sense, since he got it off a DEAD HOMELESS GUY! |
| qhrciskrpc chapter 9 . 7/8/2016 501 Good story |
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/8/2016 500! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/8/2016 499 |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/8/2016 498 |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/8/2016 497 |
| qhrciskrpc chapter 2 . 7/8/2016 496 |
