ahhhh! That so cute 3
I love relationship Dannyl/Achati :)

Aw that last sentence made me very happy. :D I'm beginning to think that I'm in the minority for liking Trudi's choices w/r/t the Dannyl/Tayend relationship. -Yasu

aw i like this, even thou i dont like Achati in the book all that much.i like how you write dannyl here, and they both seem so sweet. you said you wrote another story about them, if you finish it i hope you show it!

Interesting idea Stuffs! Can't wait to see how it develops :)

I love your style, it's not too longwinded

xx

I've some terrible news for you, I'm still not shocked or outraged :P

BUT on the bright side I really enjoyed this! I think i've only read one other fic with Achati in it, so it was really great that you wrote from his pov. Even though I don't see him and Dannyl realisitcally getting together, I still feel really sympathetic for him in this story, and I want him to have a happy ending in TST. He seems like a really nice guy, and you portray him in such a likeable and relatable way in this story.

I usually have issues with Tayend being "vilified", especially since TAM, cos I just think he needs to be given a chance to justify himself. But taken from Achati's pov, I can distance myself from my defensiveness of Tayend, and instead focus on Dannyl, and how it could be best for him to move on.

Thanks for posting this so fast, and for providing an insight into Achati's mind :D