Reviews for Foreplay
xBlackStars chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
haha! i love it, so tony and pepper! :D i really love this! thank-you for reading my stories! :D
COLLEEEEEEEEN chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
...B-B-B-Benny and the Jetsssss!

Anyhoo, I...don't really care about pepperony. It was good, though, very good! "sardonic" TMOV! That was an awesome play. Molly, Jim fey and I were the only ones in our entire class that thought MoV was better than R&J. I thought Romeo and juliet was super annoying 'cause the characters were such ass-hats :P

Ummm... ravishing at each other's mouths? I think you might mean ravaging? Ravishing is very much and adjective. (Like saying "Tony and pepper were yellow at each other... Etc. Etc.)

The word ravishing could, however, be used in the context: "Mrs. Rohm, you look ravishing."

...XD LOLOL. gets to me every time *wipes away tear*
COLLEEEEEEEEN chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
...B-B-B-Benny and the Jetsssss!

Anyhoo, I...don't really care about pepperony. It was good, though, very good! "sardonic" TMOV! That was an awesome play. Molly, Jim fey and I were the only ones in our entire class that thought MoV was better than R&J. I thought Romeo and juliet was super annoying 'cause the characters were such ass-hats :P

Ummm... ravishing at each other's mouths? I think you might mean ravaging? Ravishing is very much and adjective. (Like saying "Tony and pepper were yellow at each other... Etc. Etc.)

The word ravishing could, however, be used in the context: "Mrs. Rohm, you look ravishing."

...XD LOLOL. gets to me every time *wipes away tear*
AnnaTW chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
Yes, they SHOULD do that more often. Brilliant, loved this :)
Mae Stark chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
So cute. My favorite part is when Tony doesn't tell her about how the game buzzes, and she freaks out. That's so totally them!

I know you have been trying to do some angst lately, but I love this kind of writing. It's light and fluffy and fun, but you get some hotness in there too!

I really need to go out and get this game now.