| Reviews for Crimson Liquid |
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  Uhhhhh chapter 1 . 9/9/2017 This is the reaaaally good you are amazing I loved it :) |
 DanceandFanfiction chapter 1 . 12/23/2014 ...WOW(Insert fanning myself) Damn that was a good steamy yaoi! LOved it son much! |
| myimagination2012 chapter 1 . 10/3/2014 Holy fuck! That was hot! |
| Isaboku-chan chapter 1 . 2/17/2014 I didn't really like it. Yes it was rushed. But it's a one shot, sooooo yup I guess it's ok |
| W chapter 1 . 9/4/2013 To all you who thinks "every mother is against yaoi" here's a newsflash: I'm a mother of two and I LOVE yaoi :D And I'm with some of you, Frau was waaaay OC, and rape is not cool. The feeling this fic left me was that Frau used and raped poor, defenceless Teito and pegged him to love him and Teito just accepted that COS Frau raped him. God that doesn't make sense (well it did in my head). But you have potential, keep up the good work! |
| undertaker.chick chapter 1 . 7/24/2013 i thought it was really good! besides some spelling errors i absolutely loved itttt :) nice work |
| Kittens Kat chapter 1 . 8/30/2012 like it. did a good job! can't wait for more! :3 |
| Dark chapter 1 . 4/25/2012 Ohh? Did your mother read it a bit? What fangirls do to hide these things *shakes head* Um, yeah, I liked the story. I did like it, though I'm into more S&M stuff. This was kinda juicy though. |
| Blake chapter 1 . 10/26/2011 I think every mom is against yaoi. My mom would kill me if she knew. I even have to hide it from my older sister which shares a room with me. It's reaaly hard, right, Perv-chan? |
| koi.no.michi chapter 1 . 8/27/2011 actually almost cried. that was amazing~ im not usually fond of rape, but i do like my fair share of sadistic dominant stuff~ that was rele hawt. |
| sUrReNdErEd LiFe chapter 1 . 8/17/2011 Love the content 3 Improve your grammar and you'll get an awesome fanfiction. Continue writing more, ok? D |
| Fuchsia Puff chapter 1 . 8/6/2011 Aww H.O.T. |
| NeonCrescent chapter 1 . 5/30/2011 too bad you had to rush the ending cos' your mother is right behind you...so it felt like 'where did that come from?'...do you get what I mean?... but the very foundation of the story was great... I'm hoping to read more from you... you did great...XD |
| Nekoro yaoi chapter 1 . 5/21/2011 So cute! |
| kimmieKIMBLEE chapter 1 . 4/29/2011 Hey! DIANA PRIMROSE hahah... LOLS ung name mo, Rio! I personally don't know the 7 ghost series and he characters there. Well, since most reviews are ouchies, so I will state the positive side... hehe... I may not have the right to say such but... I think you're a good smut/hardcore writer. I don't know if that's a compliment though... The descriptions were good, however the flow of the story is a little confusing. I understand how you just tried to put everything inside your head into this story, and thus, resulted to a lot of grammatical errors. For me it's considerable. XD It's okay rio-chan, keep writing stories, and if you would allow, I can edit them for you. Hehe... See ya, Yo-chan |
